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I tripped over a site yesterday, after a general search for Dark Erotica.
TONS of writing info here (listed along the right hand side - although some links are only accessible from certain pages it seems - a bit confuzzling).
Anyway - this particular article struck me, because the author seems to be RECOMMENDING the use of what would ordinarily be called 'purple prose' - and the use (over-use?) of adverbs and adjectives.
QUOTE: "Use craploads of Adjectives to describe sensations. THIS is where you use all your purple prose. Make every adjective highly opinionated to get the reader right into the action as though THEY are feeling it. "
On another page from the site (which I can't lay hands this morning for some reason, though I was sure I bookmarked the darn thing *sigh*), she says pretty much the same thing about adverbs - all those 'ly' words we are always told to use sparingly - if at all.
Again, she said it (heavy use of adverbs) would add to the feeling of immediacy and bring the reader INTO the action, making them "feel" what the character is feeling, during that sex scene.
This gal makes her living writing erotica, so I suppose she must know what she's talking about (and has generously shared a TON of 'writing erotica advice' for the rest of us, as I said earlier), so I sure don't want to complain.
I'm curious though, what the rest of you think about this in particular - (ie: use of purple prose) - since it seems contrary to most other writing advice I've read.
IS there a time and place where 'purple prose' is not only OK - but necessary - such as writing sex scenes? Are there other rules that ONLY apply to writing erotica?
How do YOU handle this issue?
Thanks guys,
Sass
TONS of writing info here (listed along the right hand side - although some links are only accessible from certain pages it seems - a bit confuzzling).
Anyway - this particular article struck me, because the author seems to be RECOMMENDING the use of what would ordinarily be called 'purple prose' - and the use (over-use?) of adverbs and adjectives.
QUOTE: "Use craploads of Adjectives to describe sensations. THIS is where you use all your purple prose. Make every adjective highly opinionated to get the reader right into the action as though THEY are feeling it. "
On another page from the site (which I can't lay hands this morning for some reason, though I was sure I bookmarked the darn thing *sigh*), she says pretty much the same thing about adverbs - all those 'ly' words we are always told to use sparingly - if at all.
Again, she said it (heavy use of adverbs) would add to the feeling of immediacy and bring the reader INTO the action, making them "feel" what the character is feeling, during that sex scene.
This gal makes her living writing erotica, so I suppose she must know what she's talking about (and has generously shared a TON of 'writing erotica advice' for the rest of us, as I said earlier), so I sure don't want to complain.
I'm curious though, what the rest of you think about this in particular - (ie: use of purple prose) - since it seems contrary to most other writing advice I've read.
IS there a time and place where 'purple prose' is not only OK - but necessary - such as writing sex scenes? Are there other rules that ONLY apply to writing erotica?
How do YOU handle this issue?
Thanks guys,
Sass
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