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I came across the following clause in a paper I'm editing: "After collaboration between Agency A, Agency B, and Agency C, blahblahblah happened."

While I realize that between is sometimes appropriate for more than two subjects, my first thought was to replace it with among. But that version looked, if anything, clumsier to my eye.

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I'd use among. I also think I'll move this thread over to grammar because it's more about a nuts-and-bolts discussion than the more theoretical things we have in here.
 

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"Among" is correct. I've given up on convincing anyone else that the more-than-two "between" is a bad thing, though.
 

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"Between", by definition, implies two items, juxtaposed. More than that, it should be "among". That a lot of people misuse the word "between" doesn't make the misuse correct.

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"Between", by definition, implies two items, juxtaposed. More than that, it should be "among". That a lot of people misuse the word "between" doesn't make the misuse correct.

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I don't know of a single reliable dictionary, or a notable expert on usage (with the exception of Eric Partridge), that supports that notion. As noted in the SOED, between is "The only word expressing the relation of a thing to many surrounding things severally and individually." This is true of US usage as well. From the AHD:

According to a widely repeated but unjustified tradition, "between is used for two, and among for more than two." It is true that between is the only choice when exactly two entities are specified: the choice between (not among) good and evil, the rivalry between (not among) Great Britain and France. When more than two entities are involved, however, or when the number of entities is unspecified, the choice of one or the other word depends on the intended sense. Between is used when the entities are considered as distinct individuals; among, when they are considered as a mass or collectivity.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/between

For example: a triangle is the space lying between (not among) three points; voters choose between four candidates.
 
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I need the full sentence. "Between" is probably wrong here, but something odd about the sentence that compels me to ask for the full sentence. I'll conjecture that maybe the collaboration has been between any two of the three agencies at a time (as between A and B, B and C, A and C).
 
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http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/between

For example: a triangle is the space lying between (not among) three points; voters choose between four candidates.

That's why I have my suspicion of the above. "Between" may be correct. But I don't agree with your examples, Flay. A triangle is the space inside the minimum perimeter of three points and voters choose from among.... Between is used if the voters have to choose between two voters at a time, not from the four as a group.
 

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To add to what Flay said, here's a note from the Online OED:
In all senses, between has been, from its earliest appearance, extended to more than two. In OE. and ME. it was so extended in sense 1, in which AMONG is now considered better. It is still the only word available to express the relation of a thing to many surrounding things severally and individually, among expressing a relation to them collectively and vaguely: we should not say ‘the space lying among the three points,’ or ‘a treaty among three powers,’ or ‘the choice lies among the three candidates in the select list,’ or ‘to insert a needle among the closed petals of a flower.’
 

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To add to what Flay said, here's a note from the Online OED:
My understanding was "between" indicated a spacial concept. E.g. "between a rock and a hard place." Where the speaker/subject was separated from the concept. Or as Flay stated they are individual concepts.

Among denotes a more vague concept of fluid value where the subject is included with the concept or the concepts are similar. E.g. "we lived among the lilies."

Is that wrong?

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My understanding was "between" indicated a spacial concept. E.g. "between a rock and a hard place." Where the speaker/subject was separated from the concept. Or as Flay stated they are individual concepts.

Among denotes a more vague concept of fluid value where the subject is included with the concept or the concepts are similar. E.g. "we lived among the lilies."

Is that wrong?

Amy

That looks right to me. "Honor among thieves" indicates two relationships -- thief-to-thief, and thief-to-world.

Not that it's really a saying, but "Honor between thieves" would just describe the thief-to-thief relationship.

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I came across the following clause in a paper I'm editing: "After collaboration between Agency A, Agency B, and Agency C, blahblahblah happened."

I think the awkwardness of the sentence is in using singular agencies rather than plural agencies, i.e.:

After collaboration among Agencies A, B, and C, blahblahblah happened.
 

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Among denotes a more vague concept of fluid value where the subject is included with the concept or the concepts are similar. E.g. "we lived among the lilies."


The lilies are not fluid, they are simply many. If the subject was houses, I could live between houses (a blue house and a red house) or among many houses in a gated community.
 

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in the 'honor among thieves' be visualized like honor in the center of a circle of thieves?, or at the least, the concept of honor on one side and 2 or more thieves on the other, putting the phrase in the midst of 3?
 

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I think the awkwardness of the sentence is in using singular agencies rather than plural agencies, i.e.:

After collaboration among Agencies A, B, and C, blahblahblah happened.

To me the 'among' goes more with the verb being used, rather than the number of entities involved. For example, it would be:

A collaboration between agencies.

and

A consensus among agencies.


Of course, that's just what sounds right to me. Take it for what it's worth.

As to this:

in the 'honor among thieves' be visualized like honor in the center of a circle of thieves?, or at the least, the concept of honor on one side and 2 or more thieves on the other, putting the phrase in the midst of 3?

Huh?
 
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