I need a Beta for first 50 pages..

I drafted my query and picked my top 10 dream agents and sent them all out according to each ones desire.

Against all odds number three wants the first 50 pages!!!



I've revised it til I'm cross-eyed and second guessing myself....anybody interested in helping a brother out?

Mystery/Suspense

murder/rape/language/sex...its got em all

I apologize ahead of time for the time crunch but I'd LOVE to be able to send it out by wed/thurs

pm if you want

I will dance (poorly) at your wedding....

EmilySC said:

What did you end up doing?

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I ended up paying someone to crit/proof it for me...then I sent that sucker out

thanks anyway tho

'ppreciated