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urban fantasy short story - help needed

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Fairy's Lament. A fairy is put on trial for passed deeds. This is a short story - 4,171 words. I plan to enter it in a contest and want to make sure all my i's are dotted, t's are crossed and those pesky commas are in the right place. I also need to make sure it makes sense, and all the loose ends are tied up.

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ravenlea said:
Fairy's Lament. A fairy is put on trial for passed deeds. This is a short story - 4,171 words. I plan to enter it in a contest and want to make sure all my i's are dotted, t's are crossed and those pesky commas are in the right place. I also need to make sure it makes sense, and all the loose ends are tied up.

thanks

raven
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I have a 6000 word soft sci-fi story. Am willing to swap critiques if you are.
 
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