Tips for storytelling with video/picture

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I'm not sure if this is the place to ask this question, but I figure it's as good a place to start as any...

My husband has created a website about our family travels on bicycles (I think he did a fabulous job!). He would like to make a short 4 - 5 minute video explaining what we will be doing (riding our bikes from Alaska to Argentina) - and incorporate clips of our kids as they've grown up traveling in many different countries to put on the website. He can do the technical part - taking the clips and cutting them and putting them together and all that stuff - but he has no idea how to TELL A STORY with the clips.

We realize there is a lot more to storytelling than just putting random clips together, but we aren't really sure where to even start. I can tell a story with words, but how in the heck do you do it with pics/videos? Any suggestions? Any ideas of websites that can maybe give us some tips? In other words - any anything??

Thanks for your help!
 

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You can have an audio clip that plays with the video, you can add in subtitles. I would suggest writing a bit of a script so to speak so you know what to put where.
 

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Like any story, it's about tempo, flow rhythm and acts. How you chose to tell that story. Using the three act technique and so on.

Plan it out before you start your trip -- make an outline and then take copious notes along the way. Write down your shots and remember which ones line up with the story you want to tell. Again, the big key is planning. It's also about ensuring your audience gets the message you want to send.

Sounds like a great opportunity for a documentary! :)
 
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So do we basically tell the story with the script and the pics are just extras? Or do we try to somehow strike a balance between letting the pictures tell the story and our voices tell it? Gosh - I never dreamed telling a story like this would be so tough!
 

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Sounds like a great opportunity for a documentary! :)

We have actually met with a couple of producers who want to tell the story and they are in the process now of pitching the idea to TV networks. No idea what might happen there...

All we want to do right now is make a little 4 - 5 minute clip explaining why we are going to take this next trip...
 

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You've got to let your visuals talk, too. It's got to be a balance between when the visual would be enough and when you'd need words. :)
 

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Dang Jason - don't tell me we need to find a balance!! Just tell me what to do already!! OK - so the clips that are understandable and can stand alone, would stand alone right? And the other things that need to be explained, we explain with a voiceover? Generally, is there an "ideal" percentage of each kind of clip?
 

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He would like to make a short 4 - 5 minute video explaining what we will be doing (riding our bikes from Alaska to Argentina)
what's your ultimate goal with this? are you planning to make this video as your pitch to create a tv show? or as a pitch to find funds to make the pan american trip and videotape/film it? do you want to go to the reality/discovery channel route or do you want to make a full length documentary? or do you want to make a geography for schooling video?

whatever the answer is -- i suggest you study. there are a lot of adventure type reality tv shows out there. spend some time seeking them out and study them. there are a lot of documentaries out there. rent them and see what makes them interesting. then go back and work on your project.
 

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Without knowing much about your project...

Keep it snappy and short. Four to five minutes is a good length for this but will still be a a bit of work to keep it flowing and paced. Take lots and lots of coverage - shots of you and your family doing what you do - so that you'll have plenty to choose from in the editing room. Aim for at least double what you're planning to cut down to so, in this case, at least ten, fifteen minutes of video.

When you edit, keep your shots nice and tight, don't linger on one thing too long because the viewer very quickly gets distracted. (Professional level videos probably don't go longer than three seconds per clip, assuming a paced, fluid video though there are always going to be exceptions.) Bottom line; one minute of great video is infinitely better than ten minutes of bad.

Get about a minute each of interview footage of yourself, your husband and your kids, answering the same basic three or four questions, making sure to repeat the question when you answer it the first time.

You could then very easily put together something like...

30 seconds of your family on bikes, set to music as a nice, gentle introduction.
Mom answering the first question. "Well, we decided to do this because..."
And while Mom's talking, we show more footage over top.
Dad then provides his answer which will follow on naturally form yours. "I've always loved the outdoors etc..."
More shots overlayed of the kids doing their thing, which leads naturally to
The kids answering the same question.

It's then simply a case of repeating the forumla for each question. Gets lots of footage, shot by different people, keep it nice and simple, short and snappy, a bit of funky music and it'll be fine.

If you're still struggling, I'd say just watch the news! Look out for those four-five minute human interest stories and I'm sure you'll pick up on how they do these things.

I've put together three DVDs for corporate events and youth programmes which work as I've outlined above but I don't have any of them online. If you're still struggling down the line, let me know and I'll see what I can do to show them to you.
 
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Get about a minute each of interview footage of yourself, your husband and your kids, answering the same basic three or four questions, making sure to repeat the question when you answer it the first time.

You could then very easily put together something like...

30 seconds of your family on bikes, set to music as a nice, gentle introduction.
Mom answering the first question. "Well, we decided to do this because..."
And while Mom's talking, we show more footage over top.
Dad then provides his answer which will follow on naturally form yours. "I've always loved the outdoors etc..."
More shots overlayed of the kids doing their thing, which leads naturally to
The kids answering the same question.

This is EXACTLY what I was suggesting to my husband last night!!! What we want to do right now is just kind of put something together that will add some action to our website - we've got tons of still photos, but wanted to put some video in there to make it a bit more... I dunno... interesting? We definitely wouldn't even begin to try to do a full-fledged documentary - if the producer finds a network, he can shoot the film and put it together. Right now we are just wanting to put a little something together with clips that we've taken of the kids as they grew up all over the world, and then lead in to the idea that we are continuing to explore our world by doing this next trip.

I have a three-day weekend now, so maybe we'll work on this and see what we come up with.