What's the most gruesome piece of writing you have ever written?

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I'm currently writing, some exciting gore. I was curious, to know what everyone's most horrifying piece of writing has been? And why has it been the most gruesome in your eyes? What has the feedback been like? How has this piece of writing, really freaked out people? And also, how have you written it? What was your inspiration? What was the best thing about this piece of Horror?
 

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I wrote a moonlight disinterment scene and it was so greasy and so sloppy and so floppily uncooperative - well, I nearly made myself sick.

Everyone else has been grossed out by it, but in the appropriate way.

It was a blast.

It's in a crime suspense, though. Does that count?
 
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The most horrifying thing I ever wrote was an attempt at a sword and dragons fantasy novel... though probably not in the way you meant "horrifying." :D
 

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The speech before my circumcision. Had to have witnesses to make sure they didn't take to much off the top and I needed a 'farwell, you'll be missed' speech for my buddy that would be going to a set of nether regions he never imagined.
 

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When I was a teenager I wrote a story about some depraved psycho who crawls into the Dumpster behind the abortion clinic and stuffs the discarded foetuses into his mouth with one hand while doing something else with his other one. :Shrug: Hey, I was fourteen! And at the time, I didn't know that they totally cremate baby corpses. I wrote it for shock value, and it's only the most gruesome because other people find it gruesome. (My brother ruined me on my own ability to be shocked by feeding me horror movies when he was supposed to be babysitting. haha)

The feedback and freakouts were like this: My cousin thought it was hilarious and brought it to his high school, where he and his friends made copies and passed them around. Their teachers were horrified. Luckily, my cousin was nothing if not loyal, and despite his detention and suspension, he wouldn't tell them who wrote it. My dad guessed anyway, and my denial is the only lie I can remember telling him in my whole life.

The feedback and freakouts were the best thing about the story. :D
 

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I wrote a moonlight disinterment scene and it was so greasy and so sloppy and so floppily uncooperative - well, I nearly made myself sick.

Everyone else has been grossed out by it, but in the appropriate way.

It was a blast.

It's in a crime suspense, though. Does that count?

Sounds good to me. :D
 

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When I was a teenager I wrote a story about some depraved psycho who crawls into the Dumpster behind the abortion clinic and stuffs the discarded foetuses into his mouth with one hand while doing something else with his other one. :Shrug: Hey, I was fourteen! And at the time, I didn't know that they totally cremate baby corpses. I wrote it for shock value, and it's only the most gruesome because other people find it gruesome. (My brother ruined me on my own ability to be shocked by feeding me horror movies when he was supposed to be babysitting. haha)

The feedback and freakouts were like this: My cousin thought it was hilarious and brought it to his high school, where he and his friends made copies and passed them around. Their teachers were horrified. Luckily, my cousin was nothing if not loyal, and despite his detention and suspension, he wouldn't tell them who wrote it. My dad guessed anyway, and my denial is the only lie I can remember telling him in my whole life.

The feedback and freakouts were the best thing about the story. :D

Wow, now that is amazing. I really like the sound of that. Have you still got it?
 

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Wow, now that is amazing. I really like the sound of that. Have you still got it?

I believe I have a stained, battered hardcopy somewhere in my attic. You don't want to read it, do you?

Now I'm truly horrified. ;)

(I'll look for it.)
 

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The speech before my circumcision. Had to have witnesses to make sure they didn't take to much off the top and I needed a 'farwell, you'll be missed' speech for my buddy that would be going to a set of nether regions he never imagined.

What's an example of what you wrote, as horrifying? Were there graphic details?
 

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One solid chapter of my MC getting crucified: she pukes blood all over herself, rats show up to drink the blood on the floor, and I had to come up with interesting ways to describe all-consuming pain. Oh, and I had her hallucinate that the rotting body on the cross next to her talked, maggots dropping out of its mouth all the while. And that her dead husband shows up and enlarges the holes.

Yep, I'm evil.
 

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One solid chapter of my MC getting crucified: she pukes blood all over herself, rats show up to drink the blood on the floor, and I had to come up with interesting ways to describe all-consuming pain. Oh, and I had her hallucinate that the rotting body on the cross next to her talked, maggots dropping out of its mouth all the while. And that her dead husband shows up and enlarges the holes.

Yep, I'm evil.

Sounds good. :)
 

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What's an example of what you wrote, as horrifying? Were there graphic details?

The horror I have written so far isn't so much built around gore but on the horror of what we as a species are capable of. My book I had out was about a demon yes, but not gorey. She was a demon in human form and needed her offspring to keep her young and powerful. So she brough men home to rape and impregnate her daughter and expected her daughter to thank her afterwards.

Not really bad in the horror sense of the word but bad because we, as a species, are capable of things like this.

I've not really delved into the Clive Barker, Wes Craven kind of horror yet, I'm more the King and Koontz kind of writer where the supernatural is just a hair width away from being plausable and, to me, that is more horrific then anything else cause it could happen.
 

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I've not really delved into the Clive Barker, Wes Craven kind of horror yet, I'm more the King and Koontz kind of writer where the supernatural is just a hair width away from being plausable and, to me, that is more horrific then anything else cause it could happen.

I go for that angle of horror as well. It's much more frightening to me than straight gore or violence.

Although saying that, I did write a story that features a pregnant woman being torn apart by a load of babies. I just left out the details. :D
 

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I go for that angle of horror as well. It's much more frightening to me than straight gore or violence.

Although saying that, I did write a story that features a pregnant woman being torn apart by a load of babies. I just left out the details. :D

Sometimes, leaving out the details makes it more horrifying.
 

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I wrote a story about cannibals with regenerative powers that got many responses regarding how gruesome it was. Funny thing, I reined in (or at least I thought I did) much of the explicit elements. For instance, a scene where a character has their head blown off only to have it subsequently begin regenerating is considerably less detailed than how I'd initially written it.
 

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I wrote a scene where this serial killer was raping and killing his soon-to-be ex-wife. It was to kick his serial killer career into the big time, out of stalking and beating people up. Oh, and he had just turned into a vampire, too, so that squicky part got thrown in. He did all kinds of gruesome things to her body while she was still alive, etc. Even more revolting stuff afterwards.

It gave me shivers, and I didn't really get into as much detail as I could have. I was so totally grossed out by what I saw in my own head that I had trouble writing it clearly.

I've set that book aside for now. The character is really repugnant to me, and I'm having trouble with the book as a result. *sigh*
 

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I wrote a story about cannibals with regenerative powers that got many responses regarding how gruesome it was. Funny thing, I reined in (or at least I thought I did) much of the explicit elements. For instance, a scene where a character has their head blown off only to have it subsequently begin regenerating is considerably less detailed than how I'd initially written it.

That actually sounds really cool! LOL
 

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I try to envision the violent moments I write as how Scorcese would portray it on film. Not ignoring it, but not lingering either.
 

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I try to envision the violent moments I write as how Scorcese would portray it on film. Not ignoring it, but not lingering either.

Not a bad idea. Thanks for the tip! :D
 

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I can't describe here the squickiest scene I wrote because it's NC-17. I tapped into what would completely freak me out as a woman (without actual rape), and then I had the bad guy do it to the MC.

I have a new moment, tho, that combines squick and gore, yeah! From the sequel to the horror. MC's ex-GF and crew have nailed MC to a cross. The pain has shorted out his censors and when the ex-GF sneaks in to watch/talk to him, he flashes back to their cult life as teenagers. As he loses it, he asks her if she's going to drink his blood like they did then with the victims. She comes closer, stands on tiptoe, gently touches her lips to his, then mashes their lips together and sucks the blood from his mouth that he's been gradually puking up.

This is her turning point, however--she realizes what a sick freak she grew up as and rescues him.

I love writing horror! MWHAHAHAHAHA! :e2headban
 

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I wrote a scene for a book (that was later removed) where the hero (yes, the hero---admittedly an anti-hero) tortures the scumbag owner of a shop because he sold him a faulty product. I had a lot of fun with that scene, because I was really ticked about a very similar thing at the time, so I got really . . . visual. I haven't looked at it in years, but I seem to remember him blowing off both his kneecaps with a shotgun and then rigging his chair to choke him to death unless he kept his leg muscles tensed.

But you can't keep muscles tensed forever... :D
 
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