Exercises in developing characters

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What are some things you do to help you develop strong characters?

Here are some things I do:

1. Write a history for the character.
2. Journal in 1st person as the character.
3. Create a bio poem for the character.
4. Create an attribute list for the character.
5. Search in magazines or online for pictures to represent my character.
 

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What are some things you do to help you develop strong characters?

Here are some things I do:

1. Write a history for the character.
2. Journal in 1st person as the character.
3. Create a bio poem for the character.
4. Create an attribute list for the character.
5. Search in magazines or online for pictures to represent my character.

Wow! I commend you. You're very thorough. :)
 

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Journal in 1st person as the character.
Ohhh..good idea.

I have some magazine pictures and I have written histories and keep 3x5 cards with things like eye color and siblings names at hand. But that is a good one. I'll have to try that. Thanks.
 

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While I don't recommend this, John Braine (one of England's famous "angry young men") says in Writing A Novel (paraphrasing here), "Don't worry about who your characters are -- their actions will reveal their personalities."

Just goes to show how different authors' approaches to writing can be.
 
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I've only gone to so far as to keep handwritten notes about each character. I guess I can see them so clearly in my mind that I've not found anything else necessary.
 

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I have a much easier time keeping track of my characters than I do keeping track of real people, but I've done all of those things at one time or another. I often make a D&D character sheet for my characters (or a sheet under another system if that's more appropriate) so I can take notes and have the information in hard-copy at my fingertips. It also helps me remember what they're capable of, combat-wise. Sometimes I'll write up personality summaries, or histories.

That, and I just love making character sheets. <---geek
 

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I just like drawing pictures of them. Also, there's a 'MC voice game' on the YA board that I go to if I need any other help, but for now there's just a lot of drawings.
 

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I like and many times use:

2. Journal in 1st person as the character.

4. Create an attribute list for the character.

5. Search in magazines or online for pictures to represent my character.[/quote]

Otherwise, for me, it's overkill. Even the attribute list gets in the way sometimes. See, during the course of my writing, I'll change something about the MC. So I really favor numbers 2 and 5.
 

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I do a character resume in Word.

I can send you an example if you want.
 
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I don't do any of that. Characters seem to live in my head, like friends. I don't need to do any of that to tell stories about my dear friends, so I have no idea why I'd do it with characters that want their stories told through me. I think that would lead me to force details upon them, actually. If there was anything I needed to know about a character, I'd ask him or her.
 

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As a mental exercise, I've thrown some of my MCs into other worlds that I know well. For example, I imagined what would happen if my mage character was beamed up to Star Trek's Enterprise. Because I'm familiar with how the Trek characters act, I was able to focus on how my character might respond. It's fun to imagine him explaining to Spock or Riker that in his world yes, magic really does exist. :D

Also, when I'm doing everyday things, I consider how my characters might also react. How would my fantasy characters react to going to a movie, or riding a roller coaster?
 

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For my WIP, I used enneagrams to help we work out characteristics and how various characters would get along with one another. It was fun.
 

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I actually write an interview. And this isn't something I write right away.
You can usually find me adding a question or two to the interview from time to time.

Another thing I do is a constant stream of thought about the character's inner thoughts. But all in questions.


Here's an excerpt I was writing before I came here.

Perhaps he was afraid of facing what life really was about….What was life about?….Wasn’t it what people made of it? Yes it was….he did what he wanted. He could do it for hours without end! But should he? What was wrong with doing things through hours without end? Were there other things he could do? But he didn’t want to do those things. What was stopping him from feeling comfortable doing other things.
Was it other people? Did he really like to socialize?


And so on for a growing number of pages. :D

Something that helps, and I came up with this just now, might be putting your characters facing a fictional character you already know.
For example, make your character face Dracula. Or Harry Potter or the Whale from Moby Dick. or the evil witch from Snow White.

Yes, OUT OF NOWHERE.
Even if you're just going to write "He wondered why the hell that poor man spent his life sucking blood from other people's throats...? And why he was after him in a crowded street? Why had Dracula met him in his work place?"


I must say that I also have pictures of my characters in my computer. And I have blue prints and bird's-eye view drawings of scenes and such.
 
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That's very thorough. I don't usually go that far, but I think I should try harder with one secondary character who has been a problem. I have gotten her into some dialogs with other characters in what I call "horizontal thinking" sessions (something perilously close to a nap). I think a little journaling might do the trick. She is never POV but has some importance, so I have to know how she thinks.
 

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I write exercises in 1st person for my 1st person POV characters. Scenes from their life, from their past, their fantasies, bits of dialogue.
That's about it. :) Since they live in my head, I don't feel the need to write it all out to see/feel through my POV characters. :)
 

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That's very thorough. I don't usually go that far, but I think I should try harder with one secondary character who has been a problem. I have gotten her into some dialogs with other characters in what I call "horizontal thinking" sessions (something perilously close to a nap). I think a little journaling might do the trick. She is never POV but has some importance, so I have to know how she thinks.

As an exercise, sometimes it helps to write the trouble scene with the secondary character as the POV character. It forces the secondary character to stand and deliver.
 

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My characters also live in my head, the way some of you have described. However, I have serious short-term memory problems that sometimes make it difficult for me to keep details straight. That, and I believe in planning ahead. That's why I do all the exercises that I do - so I have information on file in case I forget and, by extension, they forget. Honestly, I have 80+ people in my skull, I don't remember every single one of their eye colors.
 
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2, 4, and 5.

The only exception among the three with me, is that I don't look for pictures in magazines; I draw mine.

Or at least, I try to. :D
 

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My characters also live in my head, the way some of you have described. However, I have serious short-term memory problems that sometimes makes it difficult for me to keep details straight. That, and I believe in planning ahead. That's why I do all the exercises that I do - so I have information on file in case I forget and, by extension, they forget. Honestly, I have 80+ people in my skull, I don't remember every single one of their eye colors.

Wow, 80+ is quite a lot.
As for eye colors - I am not sure if I remember all of my characters' eye colors. People don't usually notice other people's eye color, unless it is strikingly unusual in some way. :)
 

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While I don't recommend this, John Braine (one of England's famous "angry young men") says in Writing A Novel (paraphrasing here), "Don't worry about who your characters are -- their actions will reveal their personalities."

Just goes to show how different authors' approaches to writing can be.

After reading this thread I've realised I don't do anywhere near enough to develop my characters. I usually let them 'reveal their personalities' as the story develops, although that means lots of editing later to make certain there's consistency.
 

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I wouldn't agree that one is not doing enough because they don't do all these odd things. Sorry, but I don't know many writers who work that way, but forums are full of people with all these quesitons about their characters underwear and such. I'd say most people have a feel for their characters, which is why they are creating them in the first place.

This whole thing kind of creeps me out actually. To me it's like reading "practice that teaches you how to be a good lover" The best exercise for characters is to write them, not leave your game in the locker room.
 
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