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avid-dreamer · Feb 10, 2008

Ok, trying to get the hang of this technique with the Help of The Screenwriter's Bible, but where would I be without you guys and the advice that you spew so freely?? :Hug2:

OK, which seems more correct:

EXAMPLE 1:

ROB AND BIG

hurry down the flight of

STONE STEPS

and into

THE COURT YARD

OR

EXAMPLE 2:

ROB AND BIG

hurry down the flight of stone steps and into

THE COURT YARD
I eagerly await your responses! THANKS AGAIN!!

Plot Device · Feb 10, 2008

avid-dreamer said:
Ok, trying to get the hang of this technique with the Help of The Screenwriter's Bible, but where would I be without you guys and the advice that you spew so freely??

OK, which seems more correct:

I think both are correct. Your FIRST one

avid-dreamer said:
EXAMPLE 1:

ROB AND BIG

hurry down the flight of

STONE STEPS

and into

THE COURT YARD

entails THREE very specific camera shots. While your SECOND one:

avid-dreamer said:
EXAMPLE 2:

ROB AND BIG

hurry down the flight of stone steps and into

THE COURT YARD

stipulates just TWO shots. But both are fine.

avid-dreamer · Feb 11, 2008

Oh, I see! Thank you so much!!

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