I've been writing a science-fiction/"Fantasy" story where a lot of things are like our own world. the characters are humans and clothing and such, but it's all happening on another planet, which could be said, has no connection with us whatsoever. they do not know of us. And in a way, neither does the narrator.
I wanted the story and the narration to feel 'apart' from our own world.
I made a promise to myself that I would never address our human readers in manners such as "But it was not like us humans. Instead they worked this problem out by doing this and that." I feel that if I compare the things they do with our world, people would assume they had connections with us, which they don't at all. It's just similar in many ways.
I wanted to throw the readers into the world from the start, to make it feel that it's been there before they read it.
BUT, here's what's making all more difficult.
I feel, though, that if I addressed things a little bit more lightly (and I feel that it would come much faster to me while writing), it would be easier to convey my ideas in the readers' minds, but it would lose that feeling of "it's happening somewhere else, as we speak".
If I don't say that these are things happening on another planet, and that their History is different, the way the characters react to something pivotal in the story becomes laughable, and incomprehensible. A few people have replied, after reading it "I get it that they're all shocked. I would react to that with a "Oh...alright". ' Which is totally understandable!!!! It's a revelation, that to us wouldn't be that shocking, AT ALL.
The only way to convey the feelings is if I compare it with things we have in our own history. Or if I write in a such a way that they'll grasp it and become emotionally attached to this civilization from the start, right away, which is a daunting task for a book introducing the world without addressing humans of planet earth!
I know that readers fill in the blanks 75% of the times....but would they grasp the issues these characters have with this something? It's something that we do not have any emotional attachments to here on Planet Earth, but their history has been such that they do become attached to it. And it's nothing religious.
And I do explain why they have issues with the number, but even so, nothing like what is happening in the story would happen in our own world. To a normal person reading it, which would be any reader, it would look like they were over reacting and being gigantic drama queens. but without this I have no story. and many times I feel that the whole story is dependant of an ill conceived idea that only stands if people dismiss a few logical questions....
I feel that this could cut the reader's connection with the characters and the story by the root.
I guess it really depends on how I present it to the reader.
A few people have read it and they ask a very honest and not surprising question. "Why do they react in such a way to that?"
What should I do?
I don't want to address us, humans of planet earth. but at the same time, to do it would explain and expose the things to the reader in a way that flows much better.
Thank you for your time.
I wanted the story and the narration to feel 'apart' from our own world.
I made a promise to myself that I would never address our human readers in manners such as "But it was not like us humans. Instead they worked this problem out by doing this and that." I feel that if I compare the things they do with our world, people would assume they had connections with us, which they don't at all. It's just similar in many ways.
I wanted to throw the readers into the world from the start, to make it feel that it's been there before they read it.
BUT, here's what's making all more difficult.
I feel, though, that if I addressed things a little bit more lightly (and I feel that it would come much faster to me while writing), it would be easier to convey my ideas in the readers' minds, but it would lose that feeling of "it's happening somewhere else, as we speak".
If I don't say that these are things happening on another planet, and that their History is different, the way the characters react to something pivotal in the story becomes laughable, and incomprehensible. A few people have replied, after reading it "I get it that they're all shocked. I would react to that with a "Oh...alright". ' Which is totally understandable!!!! It's a revelation, that to us wouldn't be that shocking, AT ALL.
The only way to convey the feelings is if I compare it with things we have in our own history. Or if I write in a such a way that they'll grasp it and become emotionally attached to this civilization from the start, right away, which is a daunting task for a book introducing the world without addressing humans of planet earth!
I know that readers fill in the blanks 75% of the times....but would they grasp the issues these characters have with this something? It's something that we do not have any emotional attachments to here on Planet Earth, but their history has been such that they do become attached to it. And it's nothing religious.
And I do explain why they have issues with the number, but even so, nothing like what is happening in the story would happen in our own world. To a normal person reading it, which would be any reader, it would look like they were over reacting and being gigantic drama queens. but without this I have no story. and many times I feel that the whole story is dependant of an ill conceived idea that only stands if people dismiss a few logical questions....
I feel that this could cut the reader's connection with the characters and the story by the root.
I guess it really depends on how I present it to the reader.
A few people have read it and they ask a very honest and not surprising question. "Why do they react in such a way to that?"
What should I do?
I don't want to address us, humans of planet earth. but at the same time, to do it would explain and expose the things to the reader in a way that flows much better.
Thank you for your time.
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