I finally got round to starting on my first screenplay. I just sat down this afternoon and wrote out my first scene. It's a scene that is pivotal to the whole story and I wanted to see how it would look. I am happy with what I have so far. The scene worked out how I wanted it to and didn't look stupid (in my opinion anyway!).
I am writing a supernatural thriller. I don't want to post any pages yet as this is my first draft and I want to leave it as is for a week or two then go back and re-read it to see if I am still happy with it. It's very rough and I know will need a bit of re-wording. Once I have checked it over and corrected anything I feel needs correcting then I will put a couple of pages on this site to get some feedback if that's ok? After all, while I am happy so far I am a complete beginner at this so some feedback from some of you experts out there would be greatly appreciated!
I am writing a supernatural thriller. I don't want to post any pages yet as this is my first draft and I want to leave it as is for a week or two then go back and re-read it to see if I am still happy with it. It's very rough and I know will need a bit of re-wording. Once I have checked it over and corrected anything I feel needs correcting then I will put a couple of pages on this site to get some feedback if that's ok? After all, while I am happy so far I am a complete beginner at this so some feedback from some of you experts out there would be greatly appreciated!
