Crit Challenge II: Metaphor

LimeyDawg

Scars are poems too
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Go through the poems here and find one with a strong metaphor. Post the reason you think it has a strong metaphor, what that metaphor is, and whether or not the metaphor works.

Side note* I apologize for not being so active lately, but my kids um...killed my laptop AC adapter and I'm now tied to this desktop PC, which is the center of activity in my house.