The screenplay you wish you had written thread

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Ok I have a thread idea. I don't know if it's been done before but I am at work so don't have time to check!

If you could have written the screenplay for ONE movie, it could be any movie since films began what would you like to have written and why?

I'll start..

I would like to have been the one to write Close Encounters of the Third Kind as it's one of my all time fav movies!

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If I'd written the screenplay for my favorite movie, wouldn't it have been disasterously different? :)

But that's not what you mean... hmm...

I'd like to have penned L.A. Confidential, I thought that was a smart, sharply written script.

Ask me again in 5 minutes and I'll probably pick something else.

-Derek
 

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I'd give up vital parts of my anatomy to be the person responsible for either:-

Empire of the Sun for its spectacular depth and shockingly absorbing atmosphere

...or...

The Right Stuff for its excellent approach of documenting many years of mankind's need to go just that bit better, just that bit faster than somebody else, in just two hours.
 

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This thread might generate more discussion in Script Writing, so we'll move it there now.

ETA: I tweaked the thread title to help better reveal the topic.
 
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'the empire strikes back' for making it better than the first movie, for its humour and having the 'second act' be the best of the lot.

hell, i'd die happy if i'd done the first ten minutes or so of 'double indemnity.'
 

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hmm, interesting, I'd have to say Saving Private Ryan, brilliant title as well.
 

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I have fanatsized about getting in a time machine and going back to the 1930's and then producing those scripts that were hits made in the 1950's.

I especially like the idea of doing Citizen Kane-like camera work BEFORE the 1940's. And slow-motion! Gotta show those 1930's people the purpose and productive employment of slow motion!

To me the original Star Wars is an ideal candidate for my time machine thievery, just because it was meant to be a deliberate throwback to the old serials from that era. Ditto for Raiders of the Lost Ark.
 

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The Matrix and I would have stopped there (no part 2 and 3)
 

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I would like to have been the one to write Close Encounters of the Third Kind as it's one of my all time fav movies!
I know nothing about screenplays and have to really try to envision the end result as an infant-font-upon-the-page, but I thought this thread would be interesting to watch.

But you picked Close Encounters! It's one film where I absolutely noticed the brilliant flow of the script.

Recently, (and if I were to ever get a yen and a talent for screenwriting) I'd have to say The Prestige. It one of the few movies I've watched multiple times in short order and the craftiness of the script is really impressive.
 

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The Matrix and I would have stopped there (no part 2 and 3)

I agree about shelving Matrix 2 and 3. The first one was excellent but the other two were terrible especially the last one. I also blame the Matrix for a whole bunch of copy cat films that tried and failed to duplicate it including Charlies Angels! Although I admit the scene in Shrek with Fiona kicking the Robin Hood bunches butts was funny!
 

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The Breakfast Club. It was a great movie when I was a teenager, and probably the movie I have seen most in my life.
 

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now that i think about it again, 'the producers' was brilliant. not the new version, that blows, but the one with gene wilder and zero martell (?).

i'm surprised no one has said 'the godfather.'
 

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I would love to have written ANY film which actually got produced. But if I have to choose it must be either Trainspotting or Amelie. Or Dr. Strangelove. Or...
 

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This one's easy...

THE SHAWSHANK REDEMPTION!

Not only was it one of the greatest movies ever made -- it violated several so-called "no-nos" of screenwriting. All the "how to" books and articles tell you to stay away from narration/voice over and avoid flashbacks. Shawshank is a clinic on how to do both successfully and proves that some stories need those dynamics to function properly.

Of course, most of thhose "how to" books are geared twoard beginners, but the fact remains that there is a lot of literature that frowns on narration and flashbacks.

Do a little test -- pick your 5 favorite movies and determine how many of them have either or both. I'll bet at least 3 have either narration or flashbacks and at least 2 have both.

It just proves my theory that as long as you write well -- meaning writing so the audience can understand what the hell's going on -- you can do just about anything you want in a screenplay.

Here are some of my faves:

Memento - narration and flashbacks
Gladiator - flashbacks
Usual Suspects - flashbacks and (narration if you count Verbal's stories)
Snatch - narration

You get the point.

I think I got off topic -- but hey, I really wish I'd written Shawshank Redemption. Back on topic. Frank Darabont's a genius.

By the way, I also agree with the person above who mentioned "Aliens." Still, in my opinion, the best sequel (especially considering the quality of the original), ever made. Both movies solidified two of the greatest directors of our time.

Razor
 

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Agree on Shawshank - it's one of the few movies I've enjoyed more than the book (or novella in this case).

My pick: Lucky Number Slevin. Followed closely by The Bourne Identity, Snatch and Ocean's Eleven.
 

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"Adaptation"

I would love to be hired to write an adaptation to "The Orchid Thief" and hand over THAT script with no warning or explanation whatsoever.