Does anyone here read the Creative Loafing? This year's annual fiction contest winner, which is a really good short story, is told in a POV that I cannot identify. I'm hoping someone here may have read it and can tell me what it is.
For those who don't have access to this great little newspaper, my description may suffice. The narrator is a character in the story, often using first-person references, such as "we" and "I." I thus thought the story was being told in first person. However, there is a section in which the narrator is describing events that took place in a neighbor's house that s/he could not have known through a first-person POV, something like, "Miller woke up late that day, wearing a hangover like his old bathrobe. He poured himself a cup of coffee," etc. Unless she was actually in the house with Miller, which she was not, there is no way she should have known what was going on behind his closed doors.
Is this a valid POV, or did the writer simply lose control of her prose for that brief moment?
For those who don't have access to this great little newspaper, my description may suffice. The narrator is a character in the story, often using first-person references, such as "we" and "I." I thus thought the story was being told in first person. However, there is a section in which the narrator is describing events that took place in a neighbor's house that s/he could not have known through a first-person POV, something like, "Miller woke up late that day, wearing a hangover like his old bathrobe. He poured himself a cup of coffee," etc. Unless she was actually in the house with Miller, which she was not, there is no way she should have known what was going on behind his closed doors.
Is this a valid POV, or did the writer simply lose control of her prose for that brief moment?