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...one of my characters. How sad. :(

You all know me as a rabid anti-outliner, but months ago I scribbled out some character sketches related to an idea for a novel I had floating around at the back of my head. In an ideal world I'd write a bestselling suspense fiction novel (;)!) but this is not Utopia, so I'll just have to do my best and keep my fingers crossed.

Though obviously not while I'm typing.

Now, where was I? Oh yes. I don't outline, but this time I did some character sketches, shoved them all on my Neo and pootled off into town today so see a man about a dog. Well, on the bus back I clicked on the relevant file to read through these sketches and burst out laughing at something Julian said. I wrote. I mean, I burst out laughing at something I wrote.

He's not real, SP. He's not real...

This is a good sign, right? I couldn't even remember writing this particular line of dialogue and I found myself thinking, "Ah, if only he was real; he'd be so handsome and clever and witty..."

But sadly, he's all in my head.

*sigh*

Ladies, tell me this happens to you too, that you forget things you've written and, when looking over your notes or drafts again, you attribute such witticisms to your characters, rather than yourself for writing them!
 

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Ladies, tell me this happens to you too, that you forget things you've written and, when looking over your notes or drafts again, you attribute such witticisms to your characters, rather than yourself for writing them!

Oh, yeah. Sadly, this happens to me with some frequency. I have "my guys", and they're a rowdy bunch of rugged yet attractive criminal bastards . . .

I'll shut up now then, shall I? :D
 

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Sadly SP, I do this with every book. Pretty sick and wrong when it was for my kids fantasy books and my "heros" were 16 - 22...

Now, I'm into an adult fiction and basing my MC on someone kinda know (online only). Its not so much the description of him that gets me hot & bothered but the personality I give him. Its hard not to take it into real life...
I spend every edit grinning. I can only hope it'll have the same affect of anyone else that reads it.

You are not alone...but I'm not sure this will be deemed normal with you and I posting....

*waits for replys*
 

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In my most recent, my main character and his best friend are more the type of guys I would want to have a beer with; they are guys you'd want to hang out with because they are funny, but not overly attractive or too perfect.
 
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I feel almost sad to say that no, I've never felt that way, but that's probably because, well... my characters are me. Every one of them is just certain aspects of me purified or diluted, thrown into certain situations.
Though I certainly hope I'd never murder a group of defenseless children over a rumor I took to be completely true out of pure greed...

For something completely different, TimTams are awesome. I just had some for the first time today - a friend in Australia mailed them to me as a late Christmas gift and I just barely got a chance to try them :D There's a coincidence for ya.
 
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What's weird is, this guy's one of the few characters who's completely uninspired by anyone I know in real life. I haven't nicked any character traits for him.

Getting the hots for your own creation. That's megalomania for you. And more than slightly sick.
 

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To all the girls I've loved before ...

Sorry, Jay.
 
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/backpedalling on

III, if I based a character on you, no-one would be able to suspend their disbelief long enough to accept that someone as wonderful as you could exist, even in a fictional world.

/backpedalling off
 

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One of my male characters -not the MC- is all of the great, cheeky, sexy, naughty parts of my DH, omiting the parts of him that leaves hair in the drain, forgot a gallon of milk in the trunk of our brand new car in July, etc. DH doesn't know whether to be flattered or disturbed.
 
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I neglected to mention that Julian is a suspect in the disappearance of-

Someone.

And I haven't decided yet whether it was him whodunnit.
 

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Oddly enough this has happened to me but not with a main character. I have a loveable flirt in my werewolf pack that makes me smile every time I read about him. One of my friends wants to steal him away and do naughty things to him, but alas, he isn't real.
 

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...one of my characters. How sad. :(

You all know me as a rabid anti-outliner, but months ago I scribbled out some character sketches related to an idea for a novel I had floating around at the back of my head. In an ideal world I'd write a bestselling suspense fiction novel (;)!) but this is not Utopia, so I'll just have to do my best and keep my fingers crossed.

Though obviously not while I'm typing.

Now, where was I? Oh yes. I don't outline, but this time I did some character sketches, shoved them all on my Neo and pootled off into town today so see a man about a dog. Well, on the bus back I clicked on the relevant file to read through these sketches and burst out laughing at something Julian said. I wrote. I mean, I burst out laughing at something I wrote.

He's not real, SP. He's not real...

This is a good sign, right? I couldn't even remember writing this particular line of dialogue and I found myself thinking, "Ah, if only he was real; he'd be so handsome and clever and witty..."

But sadly, he's all in my head.

*sigh*

Ladies, tell me this happens to you too, that you forget things you've written and, when looking over your notes or drafts again, you attribute such witticisms to your characters, rather than yourself for writing them!

This is definitely a great sign. If you love your characters, there's a much better chance your audience will also.

Lol, I know there's a part of this addrssed to ladies, but I think there's some part of us that wants beloved characters to be real. And we want our readers to fall in love with certain ones. It makes it so much tougher to kill them off- depending on genre of course.
 
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I neglected to mention that Julian is a suspect in the disappearance of-

Someone.

And I haven't decided yet whether it was him whodunnit.

I've just realised - I haven't even decided whatwasdunn. :eek:

This is definitely a great sign. If you love your characters, there's a much better chance your audience will also...

Here's hoping. He (I'm speaking about him as if he's real!!!) isn't the sort of man who's supposed to be loveable, but I want him to have charisma and oodles of sex appeal. He's supposed to be the kind of man you'd look at and think, "Did he do it? Is he capable? But he's so...sexy!"

I'm aiming for somewhere on the edge. Probably capable of breaking the law, definitely capable of giving the impression he would, and oozing sex appeal from every pore.
 

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Ack. My situ is a little different. I am not so attracted to the guy as I am attracted to playing his role.
He is a womanizer if there ever was one. He has a little money, but acts as if he's royalty. He thinks he's all that and a bag of chips. He's a jerk.

But how I loooove being him. His role is the one I have the most fun with. I just want to give this guy a break. I mean clearly he's putting all this out there to sheild him from the world...he is fiercely protective of his family (even if he looks like an idiot doing so). Things have happened to him to have such a guard up. And hey he's good-looking if you like shallow and shaven.

Anyway, I'm not in love with him. I mean he's a player, so there's no way...just friends...but I admit there's a little protectiveness on my part...as friends...


~Thrill
 
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This is a good post - it's reminding me of another character.

I have a short story (that isn't finished, of course) that I showed to a couple of people because they were interested in the premise. There is a young officer that shows up - he's only there for a few minutes, then he's dead. Anyway, I have had a few people say something to the effect of, "I bet that cop was cute..." or "Hey, what ever happened to the hot cop?".

LOLOL! I have no idea what I said to give them the impression that the cop was good-looking. So, I was thinking about it and I just wondered if maybe when I was writing the story (the protag is a child) I was thinking of when I was young and would watch Emergency! with Randy Mantooth or something and it came through in the writing. Or maybe they were thinking of cops that they thought were good-looking when they were young (man in uniform?).

Never once to I say he's good-looking.

~Thrill
 
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