Need help with a story

dolores haze

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Would anyone be interested in doing a private critique of a 750 word picture book?

I usually post my stories in SYW, but I'm working with a collaborator, and he's nervous about posting the story publicly.

Ideally, I'd like about six critiques - a mixture of line crits and general commentary. I'd like feedback from parents, children's writers, teachers, children's librarians, writers in any genre, and particularly from any of the above who are New York City natives or residents.

Please PM me. I'd be happy to reciprocate. Thanks!
 

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Brittanimae, Bufty, Hedgetrimmer, SarahinOhio, and WendyNYC.

THANK YOU!

Have a martini! Or any other beverage of your choice. The beaver is paying.

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:Hug2:Love the picture - I'll have whatever he's having!!
 

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Do, you know you can ax me anytime. Just PM, hon
 

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Aw, thanks--it was fun!

Mr. Beaver, could I please order . . . *glances at clock reading 8:39 am*. . . a cranberry juice on the rocks?

Glug, glug, glug . . . :)

Arggh--back to work!