Neruda's Love Sonnets

LimeyDawg

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With the great discussion about sonnets, I thought I'd put this in here. This is one of Pablo Neruda's love sonnets. I've included the Spanish, for those who hablan.

I did not hold your night, or your air, or the dawn:
only the earth, the truth of the fruit in clusters,
the apples that swell as they drink the sweet water,
the clay and the resins of your sweet-smelling land.

From Quinchamali where your eyes began
to the Frontera where your feet were made for me,
you are my dark familiar clay:
holding your hips, I hold the wheat in its fields again.

Woman from Aruaco, maybe you didn't know
how before I loved you I forgot your kisses,
but my heart went on, remembering your mouth--and I went on

and on through the streets like a man wounded,
until I understood, Love: I had found
my place, a land of kisses and volcanoes.

En Espanol

No te toque la noche ni el aire ni la aurora,
solo la tierra, la virtud de los racimos,
las manzanas que crecen oyendo el agua pura,
el barro y las resinas de tu pais fragante.

Desde Quinchamali donde hicieron tus ojos
hasta tus pies creados para mi en la Frontera
eres la greda oscura que conozco:
en tus caderas toco de nuevo todo el trigo.

Tal vez tu no sabias, araucana,
que cuando antes de amarte me olvide de tus besos
mi corazon quedo recordando tu boca

y fui como un herido por las calles
hasta que comprendi que habia encontrado,
amor, mi terrotorio de besos y volcanes.
 

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"holding your hips, I hold the wheat in its fields again"

how beautiful!

Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem.

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There are better:

Love, we're going home now,
where the vines clamber over the trellis:
even before you, the summer will arrive,
on its honeysuckle feet, in your bedroom.

Our nomadic kisses wandered over all the world:
Aremenia, dollop of disinterred honey--:
Ceylon, green dove--: and the Yang-Tse with its old
old patience, dividing the day from the night.

And now, dearest, we return, across the crackling sea
like two blind birds to their wall,
to their nest in a distant Spring:

because love cannot always fly without resting,
our lives return to the wall, to the rocks of the sea:
our kisses head back home where they belong.
 

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Much better, indeed,Limey, This one captures an entire relationship quite beautifully.

Ironically, The lack of rhyme, and the uneven lines, (the result, I'm sure, of being a translation), qualifies this as an "Alternative Sonnet" as well, although it reads quite smoothly and naturally.

An excellant example, and a pleasant read. Thanks for posting it.

Jim Hoye, (JRH)
 
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