Do you need to love your MC?

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wildcatter67

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I stopped writing fiction when I got married at 18. I was too busy raising my babies and then homeschooling them to write for fun. I just wrote all my stories in my head, as I cooked, cleaned, drove, and laid in bed falling asleep.

My writing skills grew primarily through posting on forums with other homeschool moms and correspondence with the school board.

I posted last week that I'm taking a short story class in 2 weeks.

I saw a man on the train, that inspired me to start writing a short story. I had the story all planned out and the idea was really good, BUT, I didn't like the MC and the story just wouldn't come together. Writing it was torture and it just wasn't good.

In the past, my fiction writing (on paper and in my head) was always novel length, and included a MC that I loved and identified with. I would live with a story for over a year, until a new one gradually eclipsed it.

I'm not used to writing about people I do not love and live with. My forum posts were about real people. My fiction writing was about the characters that lived in my head for months or years.

I'm trying to figure out how to write short fiction. I know that shorter assignments are better from an educational standpoint, and I want to do well in my class, but I have total writer's block.

I read several books and websites. I understand how to plot and plan a short story. I just can't seem to WRITE it :-( The MC won't come alive. I pitied the MC and found him interesting, but I didn't like him. I think this is the problem.

Should I push myself to learn to write about an MC I don't like, or should I just focus on writing stories where I like the MC?

Maybe, even though the piece of writing is short, I need to live with my MC for a long time.
 

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If you are truly a novelist at heart, don't beat yourself up about not writing short stories. Maybe it will help you get through this class if you think of your short stories as a chapter in a novel--where your MC has a past and a future and a whole lot of interesting characteristics that you just can't fit into the short/chapter.

I don't think I entirely agree with your assessment that shorter equals a better educational standpoint. Learning to write short stories won't help you write a novel. A short story is a snapshot, while a novel is a whole photo album. It can help you define your genre, bring out your voice, learn how to edit, stay in POV, those sorts of things.

I think you really should like your MC, or at least find him intriguing.
 

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The reason there are a lot of short story classes and not so many novel classes (not workshops, they're a different animal entirely), is that a short story is easier to edit and discuss in the two hours a week that the class takes place.

As for your first question, yes, I have written about MCs that I hate. On one, I finished it purely on pain of work ethic -- I couldn't stand the idea of it remaining forever "unfinished." On the others, the hated MCs were the evil counterpart to the heroic MC, and while writing them was no pleasure, I couldn't do anything about it because I had to remain true to the story, and that meant putting down every wicked, disgusting thing in their heads so the resolution would resonate full instead of hollow.

I think it happens to everyone.

And again, don't worry about not being able to write short stories; my creative writing prof said once that "there are those who are meant to write short stories, and those who are meant to write novels." Write the length you are comfortable with, and if that's novels, go for it. :)
 

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I believe you have to be into your MC's, whether love 'em or love to hate them, either way if you don't have strong feelings for them then it will reflect in your writing. If you have to force out a piece then it will look contrieved or bland because you didn't enjoy it. If you were inspired by a fellow but the writing is drying up, throw in a twist, change him, give him something that trips your artist trigger. Make him someone you'd love to write about. And most importantly: Have fun!!!

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Thank you everyone for your advice!

I think I was given false advice in a book I read. I don't think I can be any less invested in short story characters than I am in novels. I don't think I'm capable of writing about a character in a SS, that I wouldn't be able to write about in a novel.

Just because I write less, doesn't mean I will need to think less.

We often read of actors who need to move out of the family home while filming, because to get into character, they become the character, and it can't be entirely turned off at the end of the day.

To write about this man, I need to become him, and I'm shying away from this. I don't want to think like him, or be him. I don't want to explore these parts of myself that do exist, but that I pretend do not.

Before I start a story, any story, I will first need to decide whether the story is worth merging with the MC. What will I learn? Will it be a positive or negative experience or both?
 

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I love every character I create, at least in some way. I even love my villains. I don't love them all equally, of course, but I do love them.

There's some of me in every one of them, at least, as far as I'm concerned. :Shrug:
 
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