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So, I'm editing my novel. I've gone through multiple, and I mean multiple, rough and revised drafts. But, when I started editing it this time, I took the begining on a whole new course. I like the new course. However, I think it's a little bare, and I think that it's too fast. There's not enough charachter development, and a couple charachters are completely gone.
But there are aspects of the new version that I like. There are certain pieces of scenes, certain descriptons, bits of dialouge that I apreciate.
What to do?
But there are aspects of the new version that I like. There are certain pieces of scenes, certain descriptons, bits of dialouge that I apreciate.
What to do?