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Here's an interesting question:
My male protag in my WIP is human and speaks English, but my female protag is an alien and is still learning the language, thus her English is awkward, broken and she does not always understand everything he says.
So my question is, when I change from his POV to hers, should I have her hear him speak in same broken manner of which he hears her, to be consistent with the fact that she does not recognize everything he says?
Or should I have him speak normally, and just take it for granted that the reader will already know that she doesn't understand everything?
My male protag in my WIP is human and speaks English, but my female protag is an alien and is still learning the language, thus her English is awkward, broken and she does not always understand everything he says.
So my question is, when I change from his POV to hers, should I have her hear him speak in same broken manner of which he hears her, to be consistent with the fact that she does not recognize everything he says?
Or should I have him speak normally, and just take it for granted that the reader will already know that she doesn't understand everything?
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