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02-19-2005, 03:49 AM
EXT. ABANDONED DRIVE IN – PLYMOUTH MASS - DUSK
SUPER: Three months ago
A Jeep rolls into this huge expanse, past rows and rows of rusted out iron scarecrows that once yeilded sound to minions. Weeds and grass fight through neglected pavement, dimpled and bulged for acres.
Around the perimeter, three massive MOVIE SCREENS stand guard, one has 'bozos live amongst us’ spray painted in red across it's screen, over run by vines that splinter in every direction. It's steel shimmers in the fading sunlight.
The Jeep rolls to a stop directly in front of two serious looking fellas in Armanis. A Lincoln parked behind them.
okay, so how does this work as a better description of this place. and as for dp's suggestion on is it really necessary to go back to scottland?
it was very hard to make this decsion but i cut the back story on how he came to america, and just kept on adding to the present day story.
thanks again
SUPER: Three months ago
A Jeep rolls into this huge expanse, past rows and rows of rusted out iron scarecrows that once yeilded sound to minions. Weeds and grass fight through neglected pavement, dimpled and bulged for acres.
Around the perimeter, three massive MOVIE SCREENS stand guard, one has 'bozos live amongst us’ spray painted in red across it's screen, over run by vines that splinter in every direction. It's steel shimmers in the fading sunlight.
The Jeep rolls to a stop directly in front of two serious looking fellas in Armanis. A Lincoln parked behind them.
okay, so how does this work as a better description of this place. and as for dp's suggestion on is it really necessary to go back to scottland?
it was very hard to make this decsion but i cut the back story on how he came to america, and just kept on adding to the present day story.
thanks again