Won't Stop

Newyorkknicks07 · Oct 7, 2007

I usaully write some rap and hip-hop songs, but this time i wrote this as an R&B piece. It's about an old girlfreind i had, and i call it "Won't Stop"

And I won’t stop
Callin your phone
Cuz now I’m sittin hear all alone (x2)

It was late night, at around 2
I said I love you
You said you loved me to
I was happy
Felt like I could fly
Now all I wish is to die

And I won’t stop
Callin Your phone
Cuz now I’m sittin hear all alone (x2)

Then you met him
I saw it in you eyes
You loved him
That freakin guy
To think that
He was my best friend
I’m waitin for my life to end

And I won’t stop
Callin your phone
Cuz now I’m sittin here all alone (x2)

And I’m callin for the 3rd time
You won’t pick up
Why do I try?
If I loose hope
Got nothin’ to live for
You got me twisted up for sure

And I won’t stop
Callin Your phone
Cuz now I’m sittin here all alone (x3)

Newyorkknicks07 · Oct 7, 2007

feedback?

A. Hamilton · Oct 7, 2007

(give it a little time-this forum doesn't get a ton of traffic.)

I had a little trouble keeping a rhythm when reading through-it was hard to imagine putting it to music. Try to count through the syllables of each line so there is a consistent pattern, it will be easier to sing.

Bartholomew · Oct 7, 2007

I'd have to see a written score before I could really provide any useful feedback.

Won't Stop

Newyorkknicks07

It's open to interpretation

Newyorkknicks07

It's open to interpretation

A. Hamilton

here for a minute...catch me?

Bartholomew

Comic guy