Freudian slip!

JLCwrites · Sep 29, 2007

I am currently editing one of my WIP and I came upon this line....

"She grabs the thongs and picks at the salad bar."

I am not sure if I want to be the person standing in line behind my character.

Azraelsbane · Sep 29, 2007

Turkey Lurkey said:
I am currently editing one of my WIP and I came upon this line....

"She grabs the thongs and picks at the salad bar."

I am not sure if I want to be the person standing in line behind my character.

DancingMaenid · Sep 30, 2007

Haha. Typos are usually pretty bland, but sometimes you get an interesting one. One time, while letting someone critique a chapter of a WIP, they pointed out that I had a sentence that said, "Her skin hung down to her ankles." It was supposed to be "skirt," but "skin" offers up a much more interesting visual.

mscelina · Sep 30, 2007

oh dear. buffet wedgies.

Prawn · Sep 30, 2007

Turkey Lurkey said:
"She grabs the thongs and picks at the salad bar."

How unsanitary!

WriterX · Sep 30, 2007

Turkey Lurkey said:
I am currently editing one of my WIP and I came upon this line....

"She grabs the thongs and picks at the salad bar."

LOL. Thanks for the laugh so early in the morning.

kristie911 · Sep 30, 2007

Freudian slip!

JLCwrites

Azraelsbane

Agony is defeat

DancingMaenid

New kid...seven years ago!

mscelina

Teh doommobile, drivin' rite by you

Prawn

Writing is finite,revising infinite

WriterX

Happy Thanksgiving!

kristie911

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