Weirdest Scene You've Written (or Why I Need A Counselor)

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IReidandWrite

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What's the weirdest scene you've ever written?

In one of mine, Character A beats Character B to death with B's prosthetic leg.
 
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I once had someone kill a man with a rolling pin. Then I changed it to slashing his stomach with her shapeshifter claws and his guts flolloping out onto the floor. Far more realistic, I'm sure you'll agree.
 

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I once had someone kill a man with a rolling pin. Then I changed it to slashing his stomach with her shapeshifter claws and his guts flolloping out onto the floor. Far more realistic, I'm sure you'll agree.

And just as sexy...
 

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Still, hands down, would be the babies, 1 year old and under, crawling across two cops and eating them alive (with their sharp teeth...because they were obviously not natural babies, duh...)
 
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Thanks for mentioning that, JUST as I'd forgotten the last time you brought them up...
 

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I keep having reasons to bring it up! Which is weird, since the novel its in is trunked for now.

The onion-eyed girl under the bed who is drowning is pretty freaky too, but not like the babies.
 

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So many choices....

I think I've narrowed it down to the climax of one novel. The heroine just found out that the man she grew up with and thinks of as a brother is truly psychotic. He has betrayed her family and murdered one of her friends. During a tussle, he gets a hard-on while slowly strangling her to death.
 

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I once had a serial killer who thought he was Jesus reincarnated...yeah, he was pretty warped...
 

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I had a vengeful ghost who could only control objects that he'd had some emotional connection with in real life. So he had a pair of sneakers and a silver spoon. He kills a guy with the spoon.
 

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when character B fell in love with character C, who was once married to her mother.


Weird I tell you. And it wasn't in the outline. Either I need therapy or character B.
 

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I have a chapter that takes place inside a character's mind. The two chars in the chapter are mentally linked, as the MC is a master of psionics. There's blood that rains down and creates a deep lake, barracuda-like fish that bleed souls, the Garden of Eden erected in colored glass that explodes at the slightest touch, and a few other oddities. It was tough to write, I can tell you that much. :) Definitely up there on my weird scale.
 

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My main character's husband tore apart her three-month old kitten, looking for a pendant he was sure it swallowed.

He didn't find it.
 
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By far, the eye gouging (as in completely out) as foreplay on the wedding night was my all time high/low?
 

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My main character's husband tore apart her three-month old kitten, looking for a pendant was sure it swallowed.

He didn't find it.

Uh, couldn't he have taken it to the vet to have it x-rayed? Or waited a few days to see if it would poop it out?? Killing the cat seems extreme.

Okay, you're warped...
 

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Uh, couldn't he have taken it to the vet to have it x-rayed? Or waited a few days to see if it would poop it out?? Killing the cat seems extreme.

Okay, you're warped...

LOL, I don't disagree with you. But I write horror and the husband is possessed. Him taking it to the vet didn't quite fit.

I have two cats myself and writing this scene was really hard.
 

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Let's see...I had a guy carve a complicated pattern into the flesh of his arm with a knife, because he didn't have a needle to make a tattoo and this was the next-best thing, apparently?
 

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I had someone give birth to a skinless baby. And then she breast-fed it.
 

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Maybe I've written weirder, but one I like:

The Beast of Shattered Dreams was a big wiggling thing like a vast organ living beneath a decayed city, nightly digesting the dreams of stolen children, delivering in sleep renewed hope to the wearied citizens above whose every dashed desire and ruined ambition had, for decades, dribbled down and accreted into this massive, grasping, gasping thing.

Guy who found it while searching for a lost and dreaming child could not imagine its size, or that by devouring the dreams of innocence it sustained the city life above it, and ameliorated its deepest sins.

It was the cruelest of symbionts, and has proven a hard, hard sell.

Praised by editors who have rejected it, this story sits in a basket of broken Easter eggs.
 
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