when i got rabies

dickholewithrabies · Sep 7, 2007

when i got rabies from a weasel
i was scared and sad
i didn't know what to do?
doctors told me it was stinky for me.

i got over it and became a doctor

SO FUCK YOU RABIES!

dickholewithrabies · Sep 7, 2007

WELL DONE DUMBASS

scarletpeaches · Sep 7, 2007

Wow. That spoke to me, somewhere deep inside. In a warm, dark, moist place.

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

Did you like the weasel?

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

another lovely example of the beauty you possess and your consumate power to overthrow the emotions in your heart and squeeze them into lovely words. glistening. glistening work indeed. I am, to say the very least, speechless by your power. Poetry is your thing, dickhole...it is very truly your thing. I sit in awe. lovely, lovely.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

dickholewithrabies said:
WELL DONE DUMBASS

his name is dickhole, not dumbass, Asshat.

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

I think the weasel symbolizes a small furry creature with sharp teeth.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

I just love the transformation that the narrator underwent. Beautiful. A new life...and all because of rabies. It's endearing...truly.

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

The multiple use of the word *i* made me think of the author's eyes; through which he is viewing the weasel.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

the i usage actually caused me to weep. it was like it was me. great first person trick. verily, i felt the needle in my belly.

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

It's okay to weep over such a great piece of literary espousal. Um...I don't think Scarlet really gets the undercurrents of the prose though.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

has judas ever truly understood anything?

Dawno · Sep 7, 2007

Word of the day: irony...

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

I would have thought a weasel would be something she understood very well. Um...the one eyed variety, I mean.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

define irony

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

Irony away from rabid weasels.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

i try to steer clear of them too.

CatSlave · Sep 7, 2007

I highly recommend you submit your poetry to PublishAmerica, the "traditional" publisher.
They'll pay you an advance and give your work the chance it deserves.

KTC · Sep 7, 2007

idiot! this poetry is nothing if not completely geared to poetry.com

CatSlave · Sep 7, 2007

Oh my, how could I have forgetten the venerable -or is that venereal- poetry.com?
My bad.

Rolling Thunder · Sep 7, 2007

I say we toss PA and poetry.com into a cage with a rabid weasel. Survivor gets pub rights to the poem.

CatSlave · Sep 7, 2007

Hey, the sky's the limit for such an enthralling work.

Coming soon:
when i got rabies: The Musical

scarletpeaches · Sep 7, 2007

Blatant plug for my masterpiece here. Password: citrus.

Ol' Fashioned Girl · Sep 7, 2007

It resonated. No, really. It did. Completely.

Who could this new poet be? Who?!

scarletpeaches · Sep 7, 2007

Someone channelling Shakespeare, Owen, Sassoon and Pam Ayres, surely?!

when i got rabies

dickholewithrabies

dickholewithrabies

scarletpeaches

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

Dawno

Shiny!

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

Rolling Thunder

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

CatSlave

Mah tale iz draggin.

KTC

Stand in the Place Where You Live

CatSlave

Mah tale iz draggin.

Rolling Thunder

CatSlave

Mah tale iz draggin.

scarletpeaches

Ol' Fashioned Girl

Hand? What hand?

scarletpeaches