Creating a Villain

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Hello everyone,

One of the story ideas I'm working on (have already outlined it) is a novel about George Washington during the French and Indian War. It's a compelling time of his life - one that is the subject of a current nonfiction book on the market (Blooding at Great Meadows by Alan Axelrod).

There's one problem with a novelization of Washington's early years. There's no villain - at least not for the military/action side of the story, which is my focus. Washington's mother, Mary, DOES serve as somewhat of an antagonist, but she's not really a villain.

It seems far more attractive - from a dramatic standpoint - to have a hostile, more military villain for Washington to square off against, seeing as how the key scenes in my story are mostly battle scenes.

So, can I create a villain?

For those unfamiliar with the F&I War, Washington squared off against several French officers and Indian leaders. What I'm wondering is if I can draw up a composite character based on these real characters - and then exaggerate his villainy, like they did with Tarleton (turning him into Tavington) in The Patriot.

Is this permissible? Is it okay to create a villain?
 

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Brian -

I got to hear Bernard Cornwell address this very point back in June. His advice, in a nutshell: don't forget you are a storyteller. If history gets in the way of your story, change the history. But--and here's the important part--you need to know what you've changed, and you should probably explain what you've changed in an author's note at the end of the book. That way, your readers know your changes are intentional and not the result of sloppy research.

As a reader--and many on this board disagree with me--I don't have a problem with it. Tell me a great story, then tell me where your story deviates from the real one. You may just inspire me to read up on the real story.

And I think it'd be really cool to see Washington square off against a great black-hat Bad Guy. Make it believable, and I'll be all over it.

For what it's worth.
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