Hi there,
This is a first draft, it's raw, I just need some direction. Please let me know what you think. I hate this part BTW, the sum up your novel in two paragraphs part.
Rane, a chaser who feeds on human souls, must save himself and his clan of chasers from a witch’s curse. He seeks out the only source of help he can think of, Markin, their creator. But in finding Markin, Rane learns more about himself than he ever wanted to know and nothing about breaking the spell. He does, however, meet the girl of his dreams; Tash, an edgy, young photographer struggling to make sense of her awkward life. Orphaned at age five, Tash was raised by Markin, forced to occupy the thin place that exists between humans and chasers; in Markin’s home she is enveloped by death and torture, away she scurries on the border of mortal life, unable to connect with ordinary people.
While Rane is figuring out how to save his friends, Tash is learning that not only did the last surviving vampire kill her parents, but that she is a pure soul, one who cannot be devoured by a chaser; and as their lives become more and more entwined, Rane and Tash discover that in each other they have found home. Together they will painfully uncover the many secrets that have dominated their lives while avenging the wrongs committed against them. In the end, they will test whether a pure soul and a chaser can make a life together or if their differences will ultimately tear them apart.
Chris
This is a first draft, it's raw, I just need some direction. Please let me know what you think. I hate this part BTW, the sum up your novel in two paragraphs part.
Rane, a chaser who feeds on human souls, must save himself and his clan of chasers from a witch’s curse. He seeks out the only source of help he can think of, Markin, their creator. But in finding Markin, Rane learns more about himself than he ever wanted to know and nothing about breaking the spell. He does, however, meet the girl of his dreams; Tash, an edgy, young photographer struggling to make sense of her awkward life. Orphaned at age five, Tash was raised by Markin, forced to occupy the thin place that exists between humans and chasers; in Markin’s home she is enveloped by death and torture, away she scurries on the border of mortal life, unable to connect with ordinary people.
While Rane is figuring out how to save his friends, Tash is learning that not only did the last surviving vampire kill her parents, but that she is a pure soul, one who cannot be devoured by a chaser; and as their lives become more and more entwined, Rane and Tash discover that in each other they have found home. Together they will painfully uncover the many secrets that have dominated their lives while avenging the wrongs committed against them. In the end, they will test whether a pure soul and a chaser can make a life together or if their differences will ultimately tear them apart.
Chris