Submitting an outline: question

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Felicia Beasley

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I am in the process of rewriting my novel, almost completely from scratch, and after many false starts and dead ends, I reached towards my bookshelf and reread Donald Maass' Breakout Novel book and workbook. At the end of his workbook he has a small section dedicated to creating an outline. After examining this and answering the questions for my novel, I have come up with an outline for the story that I am very excited about.

The outline doesn't follow the chronological events of the story but rather focuses on the important aspects of each characters journey, beginning with the protagonist and subsequently the BIG issues, and ending with the antagonist's view. Now this works at the moment because I can decipher what goes where and also because the draft isn't finished, certain events may change places with others. Its one of the reasons I like this outline. But when I begin querying agents, and if any ask for a detailed outline, would the outline I created work (with any necessary changes)? Or do the events need to be in order?

I realize it could be months to years before I have to face this particular problem, but I really am clueless as to what kind of outline agents/publisher's prefer. I really like this type of outlining as opposed to detailing the events in the story in the order that they happen but I am also striving for publication.
 

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When an agent ask for an outline for fiction, they usually are asking for a synopsis, or a chapter-by-chapter outline. So in a sense, the outline needs to be in order (or at least the order that will appear in the book). Basically, the agent wants to know how your plot unfolds and concludes. The outline you are doing for yourself seems more like a tool for organizing your thoughts and plot points, but they would mean nothing to the agent.
 

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I'm so afraid of outlines that I don't query agents who want them.
 

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I'm so afraid of outlines that I don't query agents who want them.

Don't be afraid. Just go over your ms. and do a one paragraph synopsis of each chapter. Then polish and trim to size. There is your outline. Synopses are actually much harder to do.
 

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I hate and avoid outlines, too, but if I wanted to get an agent who insisted on one, I'd sent her the outline that sells the book best.

Never forget, until you have an agent to sell your work for you, you have to sell the agent on your work.
 
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