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Hi everyone. I have been calling my finished-but-for-a-few0-more-edits manuscript an historical romance. But it has a really strong mystery element, and after a few additions and tweaks (and after speaking with a freelance editor friend who looked it over) we decided that it really is a mystery with a heavy side of romance. It is set in Victorian England. So, would I classify this as an historical mystery, a romantic mystery, a gothic romance? I don't know why this is so hard, but I just can't figure it out. :)
 

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I'd call it a historical romantic suspense.

Lots of romantic "suspense" are actually more like romantic mysteries, technically speaking.

You can also call it a Victorian romantic suspense (more romance and less suspense/mystery than Anne Perry, perhaps?).

But I'd go with the first.

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Hi everyone. I have been calling my finished-but-for-a-few0-more-edits manuscript an historical romance. But it has a really strong mystery element, and after a few additions and tweaks (and after speaking with a freelance editor friend who looked it over) we decided that it really is a mystery with a heavy side of romance. It is set in Victorian England. So, would I classify this as an historical mystery, a romantic mystery, a gothic romance? I don't know why this is so hard, but I just can't figure it out. :)
Which is central, the romance or the mystery? If you can't figure that out, I suggest reading a couple of books that also mix the two and see if that helps.

Such as: Anne Perry's The Cater Street Hangman, a historical mystery where two characters fall in love. The mystery is central, but the love story is an important element.

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Amanda Quick's Ravished (or almost any of her older ones--haven't read her in years so I'm not sure she's still writing the same type of book), a historical romance which contains a mystery that the couple falling in love is trying to solve. The love story is central, but the mystery is an important element.

It would be hard to produce a gothic romance by accident (mostly because they have a very specific tone), but without knowing more about your story it's hard to say.

If you still can't decide, romance might be easier to break into than mystery, because it commands such a large share of the market.
 

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Marlys, both of the books you described sound like mine :) The male MC is a reformed thief who is at a boarding school to find a legendary necklace. While there he falls in love with the female MC, who then joins in the search. They dodge the bad guys, murder attempts, etc, while still searching for the necklace. They, of course, prevail, beat the bad guys, find the necklace, and live happily ever after. ;)
 

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I think a lot of it depends on just how much of the book deals with the romance. Different publishers/lines have different requirements for the percentage of romance they require in the story, if you are looking at submitting to one of the Harlequin/Silhouette lines, for example. How many words is it? Do you know what publisher you want to submit to?

They say you should write the book you want to write and then try to figure out where it fits in the marketplace. But you are going to be able to figure it out easier if you know what the possibilities are!
 

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I think a lot of it depends on just how much of the book deals with the romance. Different publishers/lines have different requirements for the percentage of romance they require in the story, if you are looking at submitting to one of the Harlequin/Silhouette lines, for example. How many words is it? Do you know what publisher you want to submit to?

They say you should write the book you want to write and then try to figure out where it fits in the marketplace. But you are going to be able to figure it out easier if you know what the possibilities are!


It is around 94,000 right now, but I've just decided to add an epilogue and a few other scenes. But I am also taking out a few pages of boring description that I got carried away with :D so I think it will average out around 95,000. I also think I am leaning towards romantic suspense. There is a lot of romance, but the story really revolves around the mystery. The hidden necklace is the whole reason for the "hero" to be at the school, which is how he meets the "heroine" and they fall in love and then spend the rest of the book dodging bad guys while looking for the treasure. If I had to compare it to a movie I'd say it was a Victorian "Romancing the Stone"
 

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I just read Cathy C's lecture series and according to those definitions, my book is firmly an historical romantic suspense. Thanks all for your help!
 
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