I've completed my script. What Should I Do?

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Hobbledehoy

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I'm all done with my script and now I'm having after-the-fact anxiety; it's like college graduation all over again. My question to you is, what should I do now that my script is completed? I've already entered several contests but am to impatient to wait on the results. I mean, come on, October 1? That's like a year from now. And I hear that you aren't suppose to query unless you have a good and sharp product because if it isn't, you will be banned from subsequent submissions? But I'm the only one who has read it! Well some of you have read the first ten pages. Though, I know it's good and don't need to be told it's good. Well, now I'm lying. But the cheapest and most quality script consultant charges a little over 200 bucks and that is a lot of money to the poor. And I have no friends, so I guess I'm shit out of luck.

So what should I do? Please share your wisdom. I'm sure I have a movie up to par with "My Big Fat Greek Wedding" (never seen it but heard it's good) and would like a big fat Greek check in my pocket. I mean if "I Heart Huckabees" can get made, mine can, can't it?
 

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What XL said. And read lots and lots of scripts that have been produced. You will find a range of styles but they will all help you. Study the craft, study movies, and write, write, write. I have written over a dozen feature scripts, the first few are not worth mention, they were learning scripts. It takes a while to get a good grasp on the craft.
 

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ditto
start working on your next one because this one you've just finished is crap. you don't know it yet but you will know it is soon enough.
then start on your third.
 

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And I hear that you aren't suppose to query unless you have a good and sharp product because if it isn't, you will be banned from subsequent submissions?

I'm not sure you will be banned but some prod cos only allow so many submissions a year, and since they put you in a database, they will form very strong opinions about you based on that first submission. But when you feel your script is ready then feel free to submit to agents and prod cos. But perhaps you should have someone other than yourself read it before you deem it ready for those next steps. Hence:

But I'm the only one who has read it!

I usually think pretty highly of my own scripts as well, but you really do need someone else to read it. You have been with it for so long and know it so well that you have no objectivity whatsoever. Don't take every review as gospel, but get a couple and see if certain things keep coming up. Any bits they can't follow or don't understand.

Either make friends on boards like these and ask some one the people you respect to read it (generally people will do this if they have the time and with the understanding that you will return the favor). Or you could put it up on script review sites like Zoetrope or Triggerstreet. I don't use Triggerstreet but have heard only so-so things about it. I do use Zoetrope and there are some good folks there (as well as bad of course), but you probably won't get that many reviews unless your logline is killer or you make a bunch of friends over there. My last script over there got 10 reviews, but at least half of those were from people I knew, some scripts go by without a single review (although that is unlikely, usually you'll get a couple).

Also, you can give it to people you know to read. They don't always give the best critiques, so if you know someone who will be honest with you then all the better. But regular people are your audience, so it's always helpful to get a read from a 'regular' person (i.e. not a screenwriter).

But the cheapest and most quality script consultant charges a little over 200 bucks and that is a lot of money to the poor. And I have no friends, so I guess I'm shit out of luck.

Script consultants are generally a waste of time and money and people generally give scripts to them and pay them in an attempt to get some validation as a writer. There are plenty of people online and that you know (or could easily know with some people skills) who will give you as good a critique for free.

So what should I do?

As noted above, I find getting at least a little feedback to be essential. Then when you do think it's ready it's all contests and querying. Not much else to be done. While waiting to hear back from contests and readers, write your logline (this may take you as long as the entire screenplay did), synopsis and query letter. And like the others said, work on the next screenplay. Agents generally want to see that you can do more than one thing. Also if you manage to sell a screenplay, people are going to be looking for what else you have, if you don't have something else to sell then you will not be able to capitalize on your one sale. You'll have one sale (and unless that film is made and is successful) that'll be the end of your career. No one will be interested in you in one year when you finish something else. So yeah, write more scripts.

I'm sure I have a movie up to par with "My Big Fat Greek Wedding" (never seen it but heard it's good) and would like a big fat Greek check in my pocket. I mean if "I Heart Huckabees" can get made, mine can, can't it?

Those people both made their own movies. Nia Vardalos wrote MBFGW and then produced it herself. David O Russell wrote and produced Huckabees (and had a track record as a director, and got big names attached). So those are not very good examples. And this is not how screenwriting works in general. Just because bad movies get made does not mean yours will because it's better than them. Just because a bad movie was made, doesn't mean there was a bad script behind it. There's an excellent Site link removed per request of other site's Webmastercolumn about this.
 
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If you can't find someone to read it and critique it you'll never sell a script!!! Sod writing, go out and talk to other writers. Befriend a whole posse of them and swap scripts. :)
 

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start working on your next one because this one you've just finished is crap. you don't know it yet but you will know it is soon enough.
then start on your third.

Yeah, this would be the case if I smelled like fries and/or was versed in the science of paper versus plastic.
 

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Just kidding Nikee. Thanks everyone for the replies.
 

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I have just finished my first feature script. No one who's read it has called it anything less than "very good." Some have said "great." Several tell me they have cried. As for the people who HAVEN'T read it, I don't care what they think (until, of course, they might bother themselves to actually read it).

My script is right now being read at a well-established production company. They recently won a [award deleted] for one of their completed films and have several significant films on their slate this year with A-list actors, including a $100 million historical epic.

Just because it's your first script does NOT mean it isn't good. It has to be read first before it can be judged. So have people read it -- people whose opinion you trust.
 
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Just because it's your first script does NOT mean it isn't good. It has to be read first before it can be judged. So have people read it -- people whose opinion you trust.

You're an inspiration, Plot. I've heard several times that your first script is always crap, and that's discouraging. I love it when people can prove otherwise.

I'm sure it's true the majority of the time, but to make it a set rule doesn't work, as you've proved.

All the best with your script!

PS: If you're allowing others to read it, I'd love to. Is it the Angels of Highway 7 one?
 
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I have just finished my first feature script. No one who's read it has called it anything less than "very good." Some have said "great." Several tell me they have cried. As for the people who HAVEN'T read it, I don't care what they think (until, of course, they might bother themselves to actually read it).

My script is right now being read at a well-established production company. They recently won a [award deleted] for one of their completed films and have several significant films on their slate this year with A-list actors, including a $100 million historical epic.

Just because it's your first script does NOT mean it isn't good. It has to be read first before it can be judged. So have people read it -- people whose opinion you trust.

Sounds like someone wants to read my script. :) I guess I need to stop being psycho and let people read it. Tell me if you want to or anyone else that has time to give me feedback.
 
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Plot,

Out of curiosity, who has read your script? How much script writing experience did they have, and how far up in the industry are they?

You can pm the answers if you don't want it to be public knowledge. I'm just curious.
 

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I'd like to read it. Post 10 pages in "Share Your Work" please. Thanks.
 

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The most important thing you can do is get your work out there. The greatest script in the world will never sell if no one reads it.

Send it out. Do queries.

BUT...

Make sure it's as tight as can be, make sure the characters rock and the story is compelling. Most important, make sure you have a great logline.

IF the logline is good, people will request it if it is something they are looking for. If after they read it and the script is good and they aren't looking for that type of film, they may ask to see another, but it isn't good, they probably won't ask what else you got?

OH...

First script or tenth doesn't matter except you do get better as you progress in your writing journey. Write another and another and another.

One thing bothers me.

You say it is as good (on par) with Big Fat Greek Wedding, yet you've never seen it. How can you say that?

1st. Whenever you write a script you should always research other films of similar genre and fell and concept so at the least you know what works and what doesn't. You also can make sure that yours has a fresh twist on the matter and that it isn't a clone.

Not watching MBFGW is bad enough but saying yours is as good without seeing it really is a disservice to your credibility.
 

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One thing bothers me.

You say it is as good (on par) with Big Fat Greek Wedding, yet you've never seen it. How can you say that?
This really bothered me too. I thought it was obvious enough to not comment on it, but since you did...
 

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I really don't want the whole world to see... What are the odds of it being stolen? Well, I do own the copyright already... But..
 

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I stand corrected. Good for you. Read and write.

As for stealing. Don't worry about it because the odds of theft are less than the odds of selling and if no one reads it, no one buys it.

As for us stealing it? I've got better things to steal from.
 

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Let's see, Hobbled read the script for Fat Greek, but didn't bother to shell out $3 to watch the actual movie? And he thinks $200 is too much for a script consultation? And he's afraid his first 10 pages of his script will get stolen?

But he's sure his script is "good."

Whew.

I'm afraid Pez Dispensor's great post will be thrown out with the bathwater in this thread. But I got something out of it, so thank you. As for Hobbled: Why not plonk down a few bucks on a lottery ticket, if you're feeling lucky. Win the powerball and finance your own movie. Your best bet.
 

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Let's see, Hobbled read the script for Fat Greek, but didn't bother to shell out $3 to watch the actual movie? And he thinks $200 is too much for a script consultation? And he's afraid his first 10 pages of his script will get stolen?

But he's sure his script is "good."

Whew.

I'm afraid Pez Dispensor's great post will be thrown out with the bathwater in this thread. But I got something out of it, so thank you. As for Hobbled: Why not plonk down a few bucks on a lottery ticket, if you're feeling lucky. Win the powerball and finance your own movie. Your best bet.


You're a blue meanie!! :tongue

(And maybe I'll go buy a lottery ticket right now just 'cuz you said to.)

--PD

(PS --Who is Pez Dispenser? Moi??? Or Zep???) :Huh:
 
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