You won't get any decent criticism, just ego-stroking fan mail of the stupidest kind.
if you just want to be read, then fictionpress.net
I can't believe it. Kids these days just keep getting older and more experienced than I was their age.
"You say that like it's a bad thing."
Lol, take it from someone who knows. If you can write two coherent English sentences on FF.net, they'll make you out be the greatest thing since Sliced Bread.