Looking for feedback on my current query in SYW

Plot Device · Jul 25, 2007

Hi Guys,

Here's the actual query:

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1499902#post1499902

And here's some background on a similar query (on the same script) I already sent out today to a totally different Hollywood executive. This other exeuctive replied (almost instantly) with some very nice feedback:

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=71617

Thanks!

Robin Bayne · Jul 25, 2007

I will be happy to take a look but it says I need a password.

Plot Device · Jul 25, 2007

Inspiewriter said:
I will be happy to take a look but it says I need a password.

Hey, Inspie, thanks!

The password is:

vista

Robin Bayne · Jul 27, 2007

Well I don't have experience in reading movie pitches, but I think it's well done and I agree about taking out the Greek Wedding reference.

I know there was a show "Touched by an Angel" but I never watched it. Is your premise similar to that, or that angel show Michael Landon used to do? (or are they the same show?) Is it worth mentioning either of those as similar or not to your idea?

Good luck with it, I'd buy it!

Looking for feedback on my current query in SYW

Plot Device

A woman said to write like a man.

Robin Bayne

~writes for Him~

Plot Device

A woman said to write like a man.

Robin Bayne

~writes for Him~