Need someone to read Chap 1 of fantasy novel [Archive]

Chris M

07-25-2007, 01:46 AM

I'm looking for feedback on chapter one of my fantasy novel. Any takers?
Chris M

ct bliss

07-26-2007, 12:53 PM

I'm game. PM me with it, and anything in particular you want me to look for.

ct bliss

07-27-2007, 05:53 PM

Sent you my critiques. I hope you find them helpful!

airforceauthor

07-28-2007, 10:22 PM

you could post it on the share your work board, you will get some amazing critiques there