Why write a screenplay?

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I don't mean: 'Why write a movie?'...I mean, why write a story in the form of a script?

How easy is it to sell a screenplay vs. how easy is it to publish a novel?

And how easy is it to option a novel to Hollywood once it's published? And how easy is it to produce a movie once it's optioned?

Neither producing a script nor producing a published novel is easy...but novel writing offers (relatively) immediate incremental rewards while script writing rarely does.

Moreover, all things being equal, writing a novel tends to be more difficult than writing a script (although writing anything great is supremely difficult). And because it's more difficult, it forces the writer to face every shortfall and weakness of a story...Clearly, it's easier to hide these weaknesses in a script as the writer literally 'cuts to the chase'...

I want to Syracuse U. to get a 'Masters for TV and Radio' in order to make my movies...but seeing the odds of getting a screenplay produced, (or getting hired as a director...yeah, right), I've spent the past few years working on my novels.

Assuming you're not writing the next Transformers or Pirates (which are basically thrill rides turned into movies), why not turn your screenplay ideas into a novels?

Just wondering...thanks!
 

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for me, it would be difficult to transition to prose writing. i've spent four years learning how to screenwrite, and now the style is starting to feel imbedded in me. writing a novel would feel like learning how to write narrative all over again. maybe i'll give it a shot with some practice exercises.

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And because it's more difficult, it forces the writer to face every shortfall and weakness of a story...Clearly, it's easier to hide these weaknesses in a script as the writer literally 'cuts to the chase'...

i don't see how screenwriting allows you to avoid story weaknesses. they will stand out, whether on paper or on film.

and i don't know exactly what you mean by "cuts to the chase". yes, it is better to start scenes as late as possible, but when it comes to dialogue, characters usually don't "cut to the chase" and say exactly what's on their mind.
 

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i don't see how screenwriting allows you to avoid story weaknesses. they will stand out, whether on paper or on film.

and i don't know exactly what you mean by "cuts to the chase". yes, it is better to start scenes as late as possible, but when it comes to dialogue, characters usually don't "cut to the chase" and say exactly what's on their mind.
I mean, screenplays allow the writer broad strokes of unimaginable power: When I say 'Cutting to the chase', I mean cutting to the 'exciting part' without necessarily dramatically creating the necessary groundwork for such a cut.
A novelist can't 'cut to the chase' without laying the dramatic groundwork...if they do, their poverty of imagination will be immediately apparent.

This poverty isn't as apparent in a screenplay because screenwriters are encouraged to 'cut to the chase' (either the literal or metaphorical chase)
 

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i see. but i do tend to dislike these kinds of scripts (bid budget, special fx blockbusters).
 

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When I say 'Cutting to the chase', I mean cutting to the 'exciting part' without necessarily dramatically creating the necessary groundwork for such a cut.
A novelist can't 'cut to the chase' without laying the dramatic groundwork...if they do, their poverty of imagination will be immediately apparent.

I think this depends on whether you are writing a good movie or a bad movie.

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Having written both, I find screenwriting infinitely more hard than novel writing.

It's easier to publish a novel then sell a screenplay, but the later will pay you more.

I think Pirates would have made a better novel than it did a screenplay. Also, the process of writing a blockbuster is a lot different from writing other kinds of screenplays.

The biggest difference, other than format, is that screenwriting is ultimately collaborative (although you may not have a say in how others decide to collaborate with you) and novel writing isn't (although some writers have very good relationship with their editors).
 

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It's easier to publish a novel then sell a screenplay, but the later will pay you more.

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Well, on average, a screenplay will pay more. But top novel writers still earn more money than top script writers.

But I think the decision has to be made based on what you like to write, and what you're good at writing, not on market.
 

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Different Mediums

different thinking.

Novelists think in words, Screenwriters think in picture.

A novelist can write anythng they want in order to put the story forth.
A scriptwriter is very limited in what can go on the page. SO, our word choices, and sentence structure count for much much more.

In many ways screenwriting is HARDER then novel writing because we have to focus on very pointed, very tightly structured stories. We have a strict, strict time frame and MUST capture our audience.

Someone writes a book and it's no good and everyone walks away from it, no biggie. It's just a boring old book.

BUT, watch a few minutes of a stinker movie!
How many people to hear complaining about how bad it was?

AND in our world, that's a big black mark. Screenwriting has a pretty small world. You put out a couple of poor movies and then everybody knows you can't write.

Screenwriting has very strict formats, tight structures, and HIGH expectations.
And then there are the trade secrets.
Send in the script with the wrong brads and ........ too bad.
 

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I mean, screenplays allow the writer broad strokes of unimaginable power: When I say 'Cutting to the chase', I mean cutting to the 'exciting part' without necessarily dramatically creating the necessary groundwork for such a cut.
A novelist can't 'cut to the chase' without laying the dramatic groundwork...if they do, their poverty of imagination will be immediately apparent.

This poverty isn't as apparent in a screenplay because screenwriters are encouraged to 'cut to the chase' (either the literal or metaphorical chase)


I think you rather have it backward. In any medium, simplicity is the challenge. Complexity makes things easier because it inevitably permits you to hide a great many flaws.

I'm reminded of a famous tap dancer who, of course, could perform incredibly fast and intricate steps, but among his peers he was most famous for what was known as "the world's slowest two step" -- and it was exactly that -- a very simple step which he performed quite slowly -- but with perfect precision. It's a step that's fairly easy to do fast, because when you do it fast, the speed covers your mistakes, which you tend to make rather often when you do it. But when you do it slow, every mistake is obvious, so a very slow two-step has to be perfect.

The same requirements hold true for the story-telling forms that have, imposed upon them, the most stringent requirements for simplicity. All of the bells and whistles available to conceal your weaknesses of storytelling -- the asides and poetical prose and plunging into internal states of mind.

No can do. All we really have available to us as screenwriters, to make our readers laugh, cry, be afraid -- is what our characters say, what our characters do, and very minimal amounts of present-tense description.

You can write an epic poem as long as The Rime of the Ancient Mariner -- or you can write Haiku.

Both can be great, both can be bad. There are likewise challenges to writing the former and equally challenges to writing the latter.

But clearly, the opportunities for concealing your weaknesses are far more abundant in the former than the latter.

And the same, obviously, is true when one elects to write a novel than when one embarks upon a screenplay. It is the novel form that is far more likely to conceal the "poverty" -- whether it is poverty of characterization, of theme, of ideas, of structure, than the screenplay -- if only because the novel provides so much more room in which to conceal it.

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I write BOTH

BUT I love the challenge of scriptwriting more.

I like the percision and the structure, and the requirements.
AND I like to think in pictures.

One other thing I like about screewriting is knowing that I can take 150 pages and trim it down.
BUT with a novel I sometimes feel like I have to add in fluff, that I have to fight for things to fill the page count.

So, that's why I write screenplays.
 

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What you like to write

I've had my profound differences about writing and writers with Mr. Ritchie, but I agree wholeheartedly with his comment here. There is no defense for either writing movies or narratives compared to other forms of writing. If you like writing slogans for an advertising agency, cool. Poetry, cool. Requests for refunds from Pepperidge Farm, great. Each form has its pleasures and headaches, but the more you try in any field the greater the craft teaches you about its secrets. My trip through Hollywood has been punctuated frequently with exclamations from the powers that be about how everybody writes screenplays but very few screenplays are movies. I'm sure the editors in Midtown would say the same thing about the manuscripts coming from erstwhile novelists; where is an actual book, or the kind of writing which can be shaped into a book?

How many novelists or screenwriters can write a play? "Angels in America" is a staggering achievement, in my eyes, partly because I cannot conceive how beautifully precise all of its moving parts are. As a movie, as well. It's a clinic on writing starkly but casting huge shadows of nuance and subtlety. But could "Angels in America" be a novel? How is it possible that a writer like Kushner cannot handle the long-form? He has no novel in him?

Most of the posters here know I loathe the query-and-pray submission process, particularly for screenplays, but I like to think I encourage everyone I meet to write. Period. Letters to Mom, if need be. Because the act of writing is a sharpening of the imagination as much as the act of watching TV is a dulling of the senses. We can play, or we can sit on our asses and be fans. Why not play, if we have the discipline for the attempt? Writing is a profound interaction with the mind, and even the amateur writer who hopes nothing for his scribblings can draw inspiration and power from his creations.

But I have to agree with the opening post that screenplay writers can hide a lot of weaknesses in a 125-page two-brad properly-spaced "script." The ease of creating a 124-page screenplay attracts a lot of writers who wouldn't dare attempt iambic pentameter or a novella of 40,000 words. That's why, partly, there are so many (millions!) of junk scripts in Lalaland. What script would the half-dozen posters in this thread agree to as a "great" script? Would we go all the way back to a turgid silliness like "Casablanca" for all of us to be in agreement? But "Casablanca" was submitted to 150 readers and production companies 15 years ago, and something like 140 of them turned it down as worthless, many with scathing notes. Only four or five of the readers recognised the script as "Casablanca."

It's a trip to have your dialog quoted in reviews, line by line, as being brilliant dialog, for sure. I wonder, though, if David Mamet and Neil Labute and John Sayles do not beat themselves up for trying something "harder." I say these three names because I personally know in the case of two that the movies are not scratching adequately the literature itch. And it is always lovely to talk to successful movie writers about novel-writing and have them instantly dismiss themselves as being incapable of writing a novel, or of lacking the talent or passion required.

And I wonder what most writers would think a better strategy: cutting your teeth on screenplays as an approach to writing novels, or struggling with novels in order to produce screenplays in the future with relative ease? Wouldn't most writers want to attempt both?
 

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I like writing screeplays better b/c I can "see" the story better than describe it in detail. I'm not great with descriptions and surroundings, but I am with dialogue. (at least I think I am)
 

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I just kind of fell into it.

My old roommate brought home Syd Field's book Screenplay several years back. I was bored. Picked it up. Skimmed through it. Thought to myself, "Hey...I'm a lifelong movie buff, seems interesting, what the hell." That casual curiosity turned into a full blown passion and I've been writing scripts ever since. Doubt I ever would have even thought about writing movies instead of just watching them if I hadn't picked up that book.

But I've also written in other medias; comic books, short stories, music, film reviews. They all had their individual challenges and rewards but for some reason I took more quickly to screenwriting. I enjoyed it more. It just fit.
 

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Not directed at anyone in particular, but realise this: You start your scenes as late as possible in novels too, you cut the fluff and you tell the story. Anything else is plain bad writing, and the point here is that screenwriting and novel writing are different disciplines, and one is not better than the other.

Which one you find easier, says more about you, I think, than about the format. "You" here being the general "you".

Oh, and scripter1, I think in pictures whatever I write.
 
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Okay, sure WM,

but thinking in pictures for novel writing IS different then thinking pictures for film.

The screenwriter can't explain things, can't write what a person thinks or feels. We are limited to ONLY what the camera can pick up. To PURE visuals. (the only exception being the occasional character description and perhaps emotional set up)

So thinking in pictures is for like thinking as a camera.
 

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I started writing screenplays because, as a writer, musician and painter, they were the perfect synthesis of all the facets of me in one medium. And while I have almost no interest in being a professional screenwriter, I sure would love to make some of my scripts into movies.
 

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pconsidine -- did you see "Before Night Falls"? I'm not a big fan of Schnabel's art, and I didn't like "Basquiat," but talking about synthesis leads me to Julian's two subsequent movies, and both seem to be about merging disciplines into very emotional -- and watchable -- results.
 

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I haven't. I had learned all about Schnabel in art school and was fascinated that he had begun working in film. In fact, I was rather impressed with Basquiat, all things considered, even though it was really just another story of an artist getting strung out on something and winding up dead.

I should go add Before Night Falls to my queue, though. :)
 

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Technically speaking, aren't you still writing it?

Unless you burned it and scattered the ashes to the four winds.

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I've had my profound differences about writing and writers with Mr. Ritchie, but I agree wholeheartedly with his comment here. There is no defense for either writing movies or narratives compared to other forms of writing. If you like writing slogans for an advertising agency, cool. Poetry, cool. Requests for refunds from Pepperidge Farm, great. Each form has its pleasures and headaches, but the more you try in any field the greater the craft teaches you about its secrets. My trip through Hollywood has been punctuated frequently with exclamations from the powers that be about how everybody writes screenplays but very few screenplays are movies. I'm sure the editors in Midtown would say the same thing about the manuscripts coming from erstwhile novelists; where is an actual book, or the kind of writing which can be shaped into a book?

How many novelists or screenwriters can write a play? "Angels in America" is a staggering achievement, in my eyes, partly because I cannot conceive how beautifully precise all of its moving parts are. As a movie, as well. It's a clinic on writing starkly but casting huge shadows of nuance and subtlety. But could "Angels in America" be a novel? How is it possible that a writer like Kushner cannot handle the long-form? He has no novel in him?

Most of the posters here know I loathe the query-and-pray submission process, particularly for screenplays, but I like to think I encourage everyone I meet to write. Period. Letters to Mom, if need be. Because the act of writing is a sharpening of the imagination as much as the act of watching TV is a dulling of the senses. We can play, or we can sit on our asses and be fans. Why not play, if we have the discipline for the attempt? Writing is a profound interaction with the mind, and even the amateur writer who hopes nothing for his scribblings can draw inspiration and power from his creations.

But I have to agree with the opening post that screenplay writers can hide a lot of weaknesses in a 125-page two-brad properly-spaced "script." The ease of creating a 124-page screenplay attracts a lot of writers who wouldn't dare attempt iambic pentameter or a novella of 40,000 words. That's why, partly, there are so many (millions!) of junk scripts in Lalaland. What script would the half-dozen posters in this thread agree to as a "great" script? Would we go all the way back to a turgid silliness like "Casablanca" for all of us to be in agreement? But "Casablanca" was submitted to 150 readers and production companies 15 years ago, and something like 140 of them turned it down as worthless, many with scathing notes. Only four or five of the readers recognised the script as "Casablanca."

It's a trip to have your dialog quoted in reviews, line by line, as being brilliant dialog, for sure. I wonder, though, if David Mamet and Neil Labute and John Sayles do not beat themselves up for trying something "harder." I say these three names because I personally know in the case of two that the movies are not scratching adequately the literature itch. And it is always lovely to talk to successful movie writers about novel-writing and have them instantly dismiss themselves as being incapable of writing a novel, or of lacking the talent or passion required.

And I wonder what most writers would think a better strategy: cutting your teeth on screenplays as an approach to writing novels, or struggling with novels in order to produce screenplays in the future with relative ease? Wouldn't most writers want to attempt both?

Once again, I must absolutely disagree.

First, the above seems to suggest that it is "easy" to write a screenplay because a screenplay is only around 120 pages, while it is hard to write a novel because, well -- a novel is a lot longer.

One might as well say that it is easier to write a short story than it is to write a novel.

It is not, in any way easier to write a short story than it is to write a novel, unless you're measuring "easiness" as if writing were a day job that pays by the hour and an easy job is one that takes twenty hours and a hard job is one that takes four or five hundred.

I am reminded of a famous artist who became embroiled in a lawsuit over the sale of a painting of his and was on the stand and the lawyer for the opposing party asked him how long it had taken him to paint the painting in question and he replied, "A lifetime."

To write any work of excellence, whether it is a novel, a short story, or a novel, embodies the work of a lifetime, both writing and living.

On the other hand, as someone who once worked as a reader at an agency, reading both scripts and novels, I can tell you with absolute authority, that you don't need a hundred and twenty pages to hide the junk, or a thousand and twenty.

It's right there on page one.

Why write a screenplay?

Why write a play? I don't remember reading any great novels by Harold Pinter or Ionesco. Or reading any plays by Dickens.

So what? Why should they choose to write in some other medium?

Some do. Some don't. To argue about whether a particular playwright or screenwriter is "up to it" is to impose a completely artificial hierarchy upon the whole business, with "novel-writing" at the top.

It implies that, well of course, any novel writer could knock off ten or twenty first-rate screenplays in an afternoon because, after all, they're just shit but for a screenwriter to tackle a novel -- that would be a real challenge because a novel, you know, that's like real writing.

Well, Stephen King has written some very good novels. He's also written adaptations of his own novels as screenplays and he's written original screenplays. But his screenplays have never been anywhere close to the quality of his novels. It is by no stretch of the imagination "easy" for King to write a good screenplay. In fact, he's never written a screenplay anywhere close to the quality of his best prose work.

There's a reason why the Kubrick version of the Shining (*not* based on a screenplay by King) is an excellent movie while the TV version, based on King's own screenplay, is very weak, even though extremely faithful to the book.

It is because the screenplay is so faithful that it doesn't work nearly so well.

A screenwriter, though writing in prose is writing for a visual medium, just as a playwright, though writing in prose, is writing for a performance medium.

It is no easier for a first class novelist to make the transition to writing *first class* screenplays than it would be for a first class screenwriter or playwright to make the leap to writing *first class* novels.

It's very common, when a novelist has his book bought for adaptation, that he wants to write the screenplay, and producers will very often give the novelist what's known as a "first pass" -- they'll pay him to write a draft. But in virtually every case, that's just figured in as part of the cost of acquiring the rights, because it is almost always unshootable junk.

Theses guys, for the most part, just have absolutely no clue how to write a screenplay.

And by the way, the reason there are so many "junk" scripts in the world is the same reason that there are so many junk novels in the world -- because there are countless junk writers in the world, writing both.

NMS
 

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Obviously, no one in this thread is a copywriter. Word count, anyone?

;)

Didn't you get the memo? We're all being paid by the word.

The word, that is. The word. We're being paid by the word.

NMS