Looking for a reader or two

Hey all.

As the title of this thread suggests - I am looking for some poeple to read through a story that I wrote and give me some solid and pointed feedback. I would post it on the "Share You Work" forum, but it is long - like 16,000 words long.

I recently submitted this piece to the Writers of the Future contest, and it did not place. I am looking to tighten it up for my own reasons - like maybe having it as some part of a future novel or something - and would like to get some critique from people who have never seen it before.

If you are interested, let me know and I can share the doc with you in either Word or PDF format.

Thanks

Hmmm...you know I have never had to try and explain what it is about before.

Let me try:

It is mainly a story about a young assassin meting out justice to a traitor of his nation - at first it seems that the story is cut and dried, but it is easy to see that Erge (the assassin) is not as sound mentally as one would expect and that his upraising has scared him deeply.