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I'm wondering if someone can point me in the direction of some novelists who do not have an extensive education. I need some examples because to be brutually honest about myself, I have virtually no education and I'm terrified.
Here's the deal. I finished 8th grade, but was too busy with the trials of changing hormones and teen angst to finish the rest. I do have a GED, finally went back later when I was 18 to get it. BUT, my main concern is that I feel I don't have an extensive enough vocabulary nor have any idea of the right words to use to make my novel more interesting.
I'm pretty bare bones when it comes to descriptions, though it's more of a preference. I hate paragraphs of descriptions, so I don't want to write that way but I do want the descriptions I have to stand out. AND I don't want to use 'said' or 'spoke' over and over...I hope I'm not being too shadowy or vague here.
I shared the introduction to the book my husband and I are working on in SYW, it is a pretty good example of how I write. But, I'm NOT fishing for encouragement, I just need some examples so I can read the works of the 'less' educated writers who have been published to get a feel of...well, just to get to know if what I am doing is right.
By the way, I AM reading everything here at AW that I can find on writing and the how to's, so you know I'm not just posting this as a request for a tutor. Uncle Jim's threads are helping me quite a bit, as are the posts on query letters. Heck, everything here is helping and I'm tearing into the help threads like porterhouse steaks.
Here's the deal. I finished 8th grade, but was too busy with the trials of changing hormones and teen angst to finish the rest. I do have a GED, finally went back later when I was 18 to get it. BUT, my main concern is that I feel I don't have an extensive enough vocabulary nor have any idea of the right words to use to make my novel more interesting.
I'm pretty bare bones when it comes to descriptions, though it's more of a preference. I hate paragraphs of descriptions, so I don't want to write that way but I do want the descriptions I have to stand out. AND I don't want to use 'said' or 'spoke' over and over...I hope I'm not being too shadowy or vague here.
I shared the introduction to the book my husband and I are working on in SYW, it is a pretty good example of how I write. But, I'm NOT fishing for encouragement, I just need some examples so I can read the works of the 'less' educated writers who have been published to get a feel of...well, just to get to know if what I am doing is right.
By the way, I AM reading everything here at AW that I can find on writing and the how to's, so you know I'm not just posting this as a request for a tutor. Uncle Jim's threads are helping me quite a bit, as are the posts on query letters. Heck, everything here is helping and I'm tearing into the help threads like porterhouse steaks.
) I think writers can sometimes worry too much about having a PHD or a degree from a fancy college, when really all that matters is that you have an interesting story to tell and a unique or fresh view of things. Keep writing your book, keep trying to make it the best it can be, and when you submit it you will find out if it is publishable or not-- but even if you don't sell this one, don't give up. Write a second novel and a third novel and a forth novel and try to sell those as well.