I keep getting told that my firsts chapter does not flow well and there are passages that are hard to understand. If anyone has the time, please read it in the Share Your Work section under nonfiction.
Its called Woman Condemned: Conversations From Death Row.
Why doesnt it flow well? What makes it hard to understand?
Its called Woman Condemned: Conversations From Death Row.
Why doesnt it flow well? What makes it hard to understand?
