Taking notes and trying to write the short story.

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I don't know how other writers do it, so I'll just add a little blurb about my own writing experiences. Maybe I need to journal these thoughts someday? Maybe not because the mechanisms that come into play for me to begin a short story are not the same as other writers.

I have a story in mind that I keep playing with and trying to come up with conflict, reason for change or not, back story, characters, (theme isn't a subjective component of this story), and my completed picture for The Four Penny Whore.

I keep four pennies beside my bed as a reminder of the story. I was working on the premise today and had to recall the time in Philadelphia; where this story begins. Penelope Winthrop. Yes, that's her name. She is the daughter of Sara and Jason Winthrop, shop owners.

So the story begins with her brutal murder. I now must work the detail, but not to worry because she died rather painlessly.

These are my notes to myself. I recall her last breath, her last meal before that fateful night. She had a child. A bastard child, yes. But he was the child of her great love who had betrayed her.

The notes of William Ashford will condemn more than his soul; he had given his love to a woman with whom the cost of four pennies could bring happiness.

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These are my notes for today. Do you also write notes about the story, characters, settings, and how the story will progress? I'm curious to know that I am not alone.
 

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I write indecipherable notes on bev naps during happy hour. When I sober up I realize I don't have a clue where I wanted to go with the story, so I just start typing.
 

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I write indecipherable notes on bev naps during happy hour. When I sober up I realize I don't have a clue where I wanted to go with the story, so I just start typing.
I've done that too! Seems we are breathen when it comes to some stories. Horror or other forms (genre) take more of my time to construct the story.
 

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I write indecipherable notes

That would be my method as well.

For instance:

Guy - new sneakers, gunshot wound. Maybe plaid? NO! STRIPES!!! chickens and scarecrows

:roll:

Disclaimer: those are not my real notes, but they're damn close.
 

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I do this too, but I try hard to make it a point to flesh those notes out ASAP. Why? Well, today I was looking at my notes for Stargazer, and there's a line that says, "She talks about snowflakes." Why the hell is this woman talking about snowflakes? I don't remember. We'll find out when I get to the chapter where she does this, I guess, but I really wish I had fleshed this initial idea out when I had it!
 

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I keep several little notebooks around my person and house for jotting down ideas. I also have a wiki set up for my work where I can type up the ideas and keep them somewhat organized. Sometimes the notes are helpful when it comes to the actual writing, sometimes they're only further evidence of my mind misfiring randomly.

Oh and when you're out and about and in need of something to write on the paper towels from bathrooms tend to hold up better than beverage napkins. Although you'll get more stares when you stuff a big roll of the stuff in your pants pocket/purse than a handful of damp cocktail napkins.
 

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I keep several little notebooks around my person and house for jotting down ideas. I also have a wiki set up for my work where I can type up the ideas and keep them somewhat organized. Sometimes the notes are helpful when it comes to the actual writing, sometimes they're only further evidence of my mind misfiring randomly.

Oh and when you're out and about and in need of something to write on the paper towels from bathrooms tend to hold up better than beverage napkins. Although you'll get more stares when you stuff a big roll of the stuff in your pants pocket/purse than a handful of damp cocktail napkins.

:roll:
 

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I tend to spend more time bashing out characters than anything else, sometimes devoting whole writing sessions to them. If I'm somewhere else, I haul out one of the blank books I carry for that purpose and add things. One of my habits from historical research is to frame all my notes (like "Ramsey's background - mother overly concerned with his appearance - leads him to depreciate himself in social settings" or something similar). I very rarely have random single lines. Guess all those history classes were worth something after all...:)
 

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I no longer do literal notes on paper. My thinking time is usually in situations when I can't jot down anything anyway.

I do write myself notes, stray ideas, and so on when I return to my computer, but I haven't done notes on paper in years now.

Plus, I can usually find my computer and read what's on it. Major bonus!

Maryn, major pain
 

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I like to get inspired at the beach, then jot my important, most pertinant notes down in the sand.

Adds a sense of urgency.
 

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I have a number of books that vary in size, from pocket sized up to letter size, and when I'm developing something, I make sure to have one of them on my at all times. The downside used to be that by the time I was ready to sit down and start writing, I had to collect a dozen books together and keep flipping back and forth between them to get everything together in one place. So now I try to condense all my notes into one place at least once a week.

I'll let you know if it pays off.
 

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I almost never write notes. I usually just start writing the story and hopefully finish it...... someday.
 
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