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Thekherham
04-27-2007, 01:28 AM
Which describes you?
1) Write the bare bones of your novel and then add, add, add, or
2) Write, write, write a lot, and then cut, cut, cut?
Will Lavender
04-27-2007, 01:31 AM
I'm 1 1/2.
Write the novel. Cut a little, add a little.
Devil Ledbetter
04-27-2007, 01:41 AM
Write, cut and add here, too.
DeadlyAccurate
04-27-2007, 01:42 AM
#1, definitely. The first draft of this WIP was 69,000 words. The second draft is 91,000. I leave out a lot in my first drafts. The final draft could be higher or lower than that, however. I know I'm going to remove a side plot I'd started to develop, but I'll add details to other parts.
TheIT
04-27-2007, 01:52 AM
The draft I just finished was definitely 2). I'm going to need a chainsaw to revise it. I'm trying something different on the novel I'm currently writing, more approach 1). I'm writing it by hand in my notebook and forcing myself not to type it in until I reach the end. The hand written pages aren't fully fleshed out, so I figure when I type it in it'll be like a first revision. So far it seems to be working.
herdon
04-27-2007, 02:06 AM
I write, add, cut, rewrite.
Sassee
04-27-2007, 02:18 AM
Mine goes in spurts between 1 and 2. When I want to get an idea out there quickly before I forget it, I write down the bare essentials and then go back and add later. Then after a while I'll go back and read what I added and take some of it out or shorten it. And so on and so forth.
Mr. Funktastic
04-27-2007, 02:33 AM
I'm totally number two. I have to do a ton of trimming.
Thekherham
04-27-2007, 02:37 AM
I'm No. 2. I tend to write, write, write. Some years back I wrote a novel that ended up at 700,000 words (!!!). So far, I've cut it down to 500,000. I do believe I can trim it down a wee bit further.
Shady Lane
04-27-2007, 04:09 AM
1. I never get long enough.
scarletpeaches
04-27-2007, 04:11 AM
I type out roughly 50k, then add another 15-20k on the longhand edit. Then I tighten it all up again when I type it back onto the laptop.
Elektra
04-27-2007, 04:26 AM
1. I never get long enough.
Ditto. I dream of the day I'll have to cut.
Wryter ABC
04-27-2007, 04:38 AM
I always write the action, plot, and leave description--the needed kind, not the "the sword was 8.675309 meters long" kind--for later. I'd estimate that by the time I finish the first draft of my WIP, it'll be at least 50k words though.
Niapri
04-27-2007, 07:18 AM
Mmph. I don't think I really fit into either of those categories...first I do a bare-bones outline, then a draft in which EVERYTHING goes in. Then I toss it. Reoutline in detail. Hide/lose the outline. Start second draft from scratch.
It never fails that the first draft is all plot, though, and very bare-bones. So, if I have to choose, I s'pose I'd say #1.
Joe270
04-27-2007, 09:07 AM
I'm the definition of choice 2. I cut and cut and cut.
I think it's probably the least efficient way to write.
Southern_girl29
04-27-2007, 09:27 AM
I do a combination. Some of my scenes are overly written, and I have to cut. Others are bare bones, and I have to add.
Raphee
04-27-2007, 10:35 AM
No rigid formulas as yet.
In my WIP, I am just writing non stop to get my story idea in; my characters semi developed, establishing the voice and so on. I have done 60,000 words in about 40 days. Target is to finish the above in the next two weeks at around 80 to 90K.
Then I take a hiatus. Take a good long look at what my original premise is. And if it is good enough, if it needs to be changed and how.
After my brainstorming I'll start my "First Write" re-structuring the novel in the way, I think is best for my story. And working on the prose.
This is the first time I've tried this approach. Before this I used to write my first draft as best as possible, chapter by chapter.
Namatu
04-27-2007, 05:19 PM
Write, write, write, cut, cut, cut, write, cut, write, cut, cut, write, edit... I could probably cut out some of those steps if I used an outline or something resembling it. Maybe next time.
Nakhlasmoke
04-27-2007, 05:51 PM
I'll go stand on the side with all the 1's.
I also have a habit of only writing one plot thread at a time.
jodiodi
04-27-2007, 05:53 PM
I'm a complete mixture. I write, write, write, edit, add, cut, rewrite, add--I just write and edit until it's how I want it.
ccarver30
04-27-2007, 06:36 PM
Write, cut and add here too!
Melanie Nilles
04-27-2007, 07:20 PM
I think you need 3) add and cut. That would best describe my editing. But sometimes I fall into #2, depending on the story and how I wrote it (slow and steady or rush through because the flow of ideas was so strong I couldn't slow down).
IrishScribbler
04-27-2007, 08:30 PM
I'm #1, although in editing, I have cut some because it doesn't flow or fit or whatever else.
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