To Daddy

[saleri]

I originally intended this piece to be a poem but I think it could work well as a lighty tune. I don't know much about lyrics and music but I can see this as a song.

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Hey daddy
As you know
I always was
A little weird
But I think its time
To come to terms
To know me true
To understand
Me and you

I always slept
Under skies
Undone flies
With little boys
And fury toys
I know it’s tough
Kind of rough
But is the truth

I masturbate
To Jamie C
The close mate
You thought was nice
A bit too nice
What can you do?
But just be true.

I like to sing
Smile and grin
You never heard
My kinky song
I like to think
About the things
You’d never think
Like stars
I stare at mars
Glowing red
Fiery orange
Swaying lantern.

I came home
At two AM
You screamed at me
I screamed at you
You hurt me true
In my heart
A little crystal
A gentle stone
I almost cracked
But still together

Who are you?
Who am I?
I know you hate me
I hate you too.
But its okay
I can cry
On my own
You cry too
I know you do

Under skies and
Swaying lantern.

[DreamWorks]

I loved it! The last stanza, with the hating, might be a bit straightforward? but i think it's great, very fresh - not your average song at all!

[saleri]

Thank you dreamworks! I can see how that last stanza is a bit straight forward, I might extend that and ease into the conflict between father and son.

but I'm probably never going to turn this into a tune, since my dad will think I am gay as will everyone else, that won't be too good since I'm not gay anyway.