Body of Work Critique Workshops! (something new to do!)

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Hi all. I thought, as your Poet Laureate, it would be fun to start something new that would help us all grow as critiquers and poets. (consider this my first contribution in this role).

A while back there was a conversation about the poet and the poet's body of work - does it matter who wrote it or just the poem? My belief is that the evolution and whole body of work is important to see a poet's path and growth, common themes, execution of same ideas differently over time, etc. So I thought it would be fun to do here with us as the subjects.

What I'd like to see happen:
1) poets who are interested in having their body of work reviewed should post their interest here.

2) I'll link several of the poets' works in a thread

3) for each poet we will discuss any of the following: common themes, word usage, habits, growth, evolution of theme and voice.

The idea is not to critique the individual poems but the poets' bodies of work as a whole so we can understand how the poet has grown, common themes, the things they do right and how they accomplish it, the things the continue to struggle with so we can offer suggestions on recurring issues.

Please also recommend anything else you may want to discuss in reference to each poet, if you choose.

I look forward to your participation!

Thanks,
Trish
 
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Interesting idea. I've begun setting up a site for my work--perhaps I'll be a test subject for this.
 

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Great idea Trish.
And Dirk would be a good test-subject :D


I was thinking recently about Aspier's work. He is one who writes around themes, and even when they change, they carry a common element. Yet with all of his connectivity to his work, I noticed in his Winter series a lack of self-confidence in his work that I had never seen before. Yet the genius is still there. This both surprised and encouraged me. It made me feel like my own goals were more attainable, yet gave me even more admiration for him as an artist. It's challenging to push forward sometimes as a writer, and I think this excercise could show that the effort is worth it.
 

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*great* idea, Trish.

How about it, Dirk?
 

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Wonderful! Dirk, do you want me to pull pieces from here, or do you want to PM me with the ones you'd like to have reviewed?
Godfather, you'll be second, and I can either pull them from your work posted here or you can PM me with ones you'd like to use. I'd like the broadest selection possible, earlier works to more recent, ones that you really liked and ones that you still feel may not have worked. Best to get a full sample.

How exciting! This is going to be fun!
 

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will each poet's work be analyzed in its own thread? this would seem the cleanest way.
 

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Yah like sewercide I should think-great idea though-feeling marginally lurkish at the moment-hey cowardice is a virtue in a machismick lobster right?
 

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geeks and pussywillows for Trish-the willows are to set in your window-they represent our undying love for you-sigh!!!!
 

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Vivisecting ...

Focus on ...

Debunking ...

Uh, maybe you'd better handle this, Trish.
 

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BTW: I have handed it all over to Trish--I'm waiting for it to materialize at some point--what could be more important than duties as PL on AW while digging CW and R&B.
 

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hmmm... maybe just a simple thing like 'A Look At... ddgryphon' or haha, 'ddgryphon... a Retrospective', or 'ddgryphon... a Perspective' and oooooh, we could have a subtitle depending on the poet!
 

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Dirk's work will be posted today.

I will come up with a thread title probably when I open the "new thread" window. ;)
 

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sorry Dirk. It's going to be monday before I get these up.
Dedicate a week to each, you think?
 

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Wow...what a brave and brazen thing to do. I shiver at the thought.
 

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it's a love-fest Kevin.
a bunch of poetry, no line by line crits I think it'd be fun.
 

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It would be, yes. But awfully scary for the one being viewed with his undies in a knot at his ankles. Man!