Yes, there is a wrong time for insight

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Claudia Gray

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That time is "48 hours before your final final final revisions are due to your editor, who will then be sending it on to copyedit."

I've been working on these revisions for about a month now -- she didn't ask for many changes, and I would have gotten the manuscript back to her before now if I hadn't been laid flat by the flu a couple weeks ago. I've been very happy with her suggestions and with the other alterations I've made so far; I feel like the book is getting much tighter.

However, this evening, I detected a slow patch in the second half. It's not long or fatal or anything, but I didn't really get it on any of my earlier drafts, mostly b/c that sequence was so tough to write that, once it came out "right" (all necessary info given, in character, in a clear setting) I felt like it was great. But it's not great or maybe even good; it's just better than it was. I think I can improve it. I hope.

So, can I rewrite about 2000 words of a 73K novel without freaking out my editor? And before Friday morning? I am about to find out.
 

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So, can I rewrite about 2000 words of a 73K novel without freaking out my editor? And before Friday morning? I am about to find out.

Sure as long as you aren't in the galley stages.

Adding 2000 words to the galley copy in pretty impossible.
 

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If you can do it, do it....surely nothing worse than letting something you're unhappy with get committed to print, and spend the rest of your life cringing everytime you stumble upon that chapter.

There's a couple of little things I was unhappy with when my debut finally went out and it bugs me. But I managed to fix them between HB and PB, so that's not so bad.
 

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Sure, you can do that. My book was through copy edit, and there were three weak passages in spots in the middle. I addressed each one with the addition of almost a whole page of text.

And at the end, we added 11 pages of Epilogue, essentially, a whole new chapter.

That was 5,000 words added after copy edit.

And did they freak out?

Well, the Sr. VP - my division's publisher - sent me a letter yesterday telling me how much he loved it. And my editor said it was the hit of the sales conference.

So, if it makes it better, don't worry.
 

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You're still in the editing phase. As long as the book hasn't gone out the door yet, and as long as you are making it better and you communicate that with your editors, you're good.
 

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Yeah, writing cram session! Way fun!!! Good luck, Claudia!

Just keep telling yourself, "It'll be a better book when I'm done..." "D
 

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Just to update: I kept working, and made things better, but realized that to really nail it, I'd need a little more time. So I asked the editor for one more weekend, so that I would hand the manuscript in on Monday instead of tomorrow, and she was absolutely fine with it. In the grand scheme of things, a three-day extension is apparently not that big a deal, especially as we have been bang on schedule so far.

Now I don't have to lose sleep -- and, more importantly, I can be sure that I've got the redrafted passages where they need to be.
 
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