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I have a story where one of my characters is a tree. The tree talks to a man a lot but only in the man's head. This leaves room for doubt as to whether this is actually happening or the man is crazy.
I haven't put the tree's words in dialogue marks, because it's not actually speaking them out loud. Also, to this point, I've had a few people crit the story and nobody has commented about this, probably because it is pretty clear who is talking at any point.
But now, as I am getting ready to end the story out, I'm having a crisis of confidence. Should I just leave it the way it is? I know I could italicise what the tree says, but then there's the risk of email destroying the formatting.
Is there any clear cut rule about this kind of thing? Any advice?
I haven't put the tree's words in dialogue marks, because it's not actually speaking them out loud. Also, to this point, I've had a few people crit the story and nobody has commented about this, probably because it is pretty clear who is talking at any point.
But now, as I am getting ready to end the story out, I'm having a crisis of confidence. Should I just leave it the way it is? I know I could italicise what the tree says, but then there's the risk of email destroying the formatting.
Is there any clear cut rule about this kind of thing? Any advice?