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My question is this: When submitting a prospective story would you include the 'Introduction' as part of the requested 'first three chapters' or '50 pages' (etc.) requested by an Agent/Publisher?
My reason is this: I have a rather lengthy introduction by both the Author (me) and the MC (fictional character). This introduction is, I feel, important to establish a specific 'attitude' that I wish to convey for the storyline. However, my story can stand alone without the introduction. I would like to keep the introduction in the final printing job, but for submission purposes, I don't feel like this is a strong point to begin with. My first three chapters (prelude, Ch1, Ch2) carry a moving and interesting 'hook' (so I hope). So when asked, should I not submit the Intro until I've gain interest with the Prelude, Ch1 & Ch2? (Then adding the intro after having gained the Agent/Publisher interest?)
My reason is this: I have a rather lengthy introduction by both the Author (me) and the MC (fictional character). This introduction is, I feel, important to establish a specific 'attitude' that I wish to convey for the storyline. However, my story can stand alone without the introduction. I would like to keep the introduction in the final printing job, but for submission purposes, I don't feel like this is a strong point to begin with. My first three chapters (prelude, Ch1, Ch2) carry a moving and interesting 'hook' (so I hope). So when asked, should I not submit the Intro until I've gain interest with the Prelude, Ch1 & Ch2? (Then adding the intro after having gained the Agent/Publisher interest?)