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Hi everyone!

It's Writers' Wednesday, and today on my blog I'm featuring a quickie (article, that is :tongue ) on comma usage. Would love for you to stop by!
 

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Having now read the article, ah, so that's a comma! Those funny looking marks my editors are always adding to my manuscripts!

Nice article. My big problem with commas is that so much of their usuage in certain spots does seem governed by personal preference. Plus it seems to me that more and more commas are replacing semi-colons. I may be wrong.
 

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Semi-colons are indeed out of fashion. I was reading submission guidlines at the Regal Press website and they say "NO semi-colons" in your ms. Personally I don't like to read semi-colons in fiction, especially in dialogue where it catches my eye. That said, there are some sentences that, if one wants them to read a certain way, simply demand a semi-colon.
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Having now read the article, ah, so that's a comma! Those funny looking marks my editors are always adding to my manuscripts!

Nice article. My big problem with commas is that so much of their usuage in certain spots does seem governed by personal preference. Plus it seems to me that more and more commas are replacing semi-colons. I may be wrong.
 

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Semi-colons are indeed out of fashion. I was reading submission guidlines at the Regal Press website and they say "NO semi-colons" in your ms. Personally I don't like to read semi-colons in fiction, especially in dialogue where it catches my eye. That said, there are some sentences that, if one wants them to read a certain way, simply demand a semi-colon.
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I agree. To me a semi-colon is used when you want a longer pause; but I'm also an editing moron.

On the other hand, life is easier when you don't have to think "semi-colon" or "comma" here...
 

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Hi everyone!

It's Writers' Wednesday, and today on my blog I'm featuring a quickie (article, that is :tongue ) on comma usage. Would love for you to stop by!
I had to "favorites" that one. Thank you Allie. :)
 

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Your article on commas is nice, but I really need more help with my use of. periods

Seriously, that is a helpful article, and as someone who does have comma issues I'll be referring to it again.
Thanks.
 
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Of course, if you're a real "writer," then you have no idea it's Wednesday, and you're barely aware it's 2007 yet.... ;)
 

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Of course, if you're a real "writer," then you have no idea it's Wednesday, and you're barely aware it's 2007 yet.... ;)

That's true. I never know what day or the week it is. I do know when the weekends are because my son and wife are home more. I'm actually still dating my checks 2005. (I'm slow.)
 

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Actually, the comma thing reminded me of Flowers For Algernon, when Charlie started to learn, what, commas, were.
 

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It's 2007 already ?!

tell me about it. By the time I get the hang of that "7" on my checks, it'll be an "8" and I'll have to start all over. Something needs to be done about this...

Allie, I read your article over breakfast this morning, and I really enjoyed it. Very well written, very informative. I look forward to seeing what other subjects you tackle.
 

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Thanks, all...

I have to sheepishly admit that I adore the semi-colon; I really, really do. It's just so helpful in so many spots.

But. Sigh. I get the impression that editors aren't in love with it as much as I am...
 

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I am glad I'm not an em-dash whore or even a colon free individual, but I do have a tendency with my sentences, partially because I read them out loud and it changes how I write them, which tends to lead to interesting and occasionally snarled run-on sentences which look ad feel terrible, but read out loud comfortably, but are still miserable to behold.
 

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I never developed a love for the em dash, nor the elipsis. I do have a thing for semi-colons though, and commas. Yes, I have to admit, I love to use commas. Frequently, mischieviously, and put in sentences where I think there would be a pause, if spoken.
 
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Oh God -- she thought to herself as she read the last two posts, recognizing a comma problem of her own -- I've got more issues than I thought!
 

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Actually, the comma thing reminded me of Flowers For Algernon, when Charlie started to learn, what, commas, were.
Loved the book. The movie was okay, if you like the original. See, I just learn how to use a comma and now I can't stop; unless there is another way to break up a sentence.
 
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