This shouldn't be that painful of a read *grin* but romance gives my usual beta reader hives, so I need someone who's more, uh, enthusiastic about the genre.
Desert Rain is 53K, aimed at Harlequin Presents. It's reasonably clean -- I find smut very difficult to write properly ... *Shrug*
Primarily, I eed someone who is good at spotting typos -- I am cursed by an inability to put the @#$$^% commas and periods where they @#$# belong. I can spot errors other people make but not my own!
I think I've found most of the typos in this story but I'm sure there's still a few. Help?
And if you're familiar with romance and can tell me where I'm going right and wrong, I will be everlastingly grateful.
The first two scenes from this story are up in Share Your Work>> Romance, if anyone wants to see a sample.
Desert Rain is 53K, aimed at Harlequin Presents. It's reasonably clean -- I find smut very difficult to write properly ... *Shrug*
Primarily, I eed someone who is good at spotting typos -- I am cursed by an inability to put the @#$$^% commas and periods where they @#$# belong. I can spot errors other people make but not my own!
I think I've found most of the typos in this story but I'm sure there's still a few. Help?
And if you're familiar with romance and can tell me where I'm going right and wrong, I will be everlastingly grateful.
The first two scenes from this story are up in Share Your Work>> Romance, if anyone wants to see a sample.
