The Highwayman - Alfred Noyes 1880-1958

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Part one

The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees,
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
The road was a ribbon of moonlight, over the purple moor,
And the highwayman came riding
Riding-riding-
The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door.

He'd a French cocked-hat on his forehead, a bunch of lace at his chin,
A coat of the claret velvet, and breeches of brown doe-skin;
They fitted with never a wrinkle: his boots were up to the thigh!
And he rode with a jewelled twinkle,
His pistol butts a-twinkle,
His rapier hilt a-twinkle, under the jewelled sky.

Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard,
And he tapped with his whip on the shutters, but all was locked and barred;
He whistled a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Bess, the landlord's daughter,
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.

And dark in the old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked
Where Tim the ostler listened; his face was white and peaked;
His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay,
But he loved the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's red-lipped daughter,
Dumb as a dog he listened, and he heard the robber say -

"One kiss, my bonny sweetheart, I'm after a prize to-night,
But I shall be back with the yellow gold before the morning light;
Yet, if they press me sharply, and harry me through the day,
Then look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight,
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way."

He rose upright in the stirrups; he scarce could reach her hand,
But she loosened her hair i' the casement! His face burnt like a brand
As the black cascade of perfume came tumbling over his breast;
And he kissed its waves in the moonlight,
(Oh, sweet black waves in the moonlight!)
Then he tugged at his rein in the moonlight, and galloped away to the West.

Part Two

I

He did not come in the dawning; he did not come at noon;
And out o' the tawny sunset, before the rise o' the moon,
When the road was a gypsy's ribbon, looping the purple moor,
A red-coat troop came marching-
Marching-marching-
King George's men came marching, up to the old inn-door.

II

They said no word to the landlord, they drank his ale instead,
But they gagged his daughter and bound her to the foot of her narrow bed;
Two of them knelt at her casement, with muskets at their side!
There was death at every window;
And hell at one dark window;
For Bess could see, through the casement, the road that he would ride.

III

They had tied her up to attention, with many a sniggering jest;
They bound a musket beside her, with the barrel beneath her breast!
"Now keep good watch!" and they kissed her.
She heard the dead man say-
Look for me by moonlight;
Watch for me by moonlight;
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way!

IV

She twisted her hands behind her; but all the knots held good!
She writhed her hands till here fingers were wet with sweat or blood!
They stretched and strained in the darkness, and the hours crawled by like years,
Till, now, on the stroke of midnight,
Cold, on the stroke of midnight,
The tip of one figure touched it! The trigger at least was hers!

V

The tip of one finger touched it; she strove no more for the rest!
Up, she stood up to attention, with the barrel beneath her breast,
She would not risk their hearing; she would not strive again;
For the road lay bare in the moonlight;
Blank and bare in the moonlight;
And the blood of her veins in the moonlight throbbed to her love's refrain

VI

Tlot-tlot; tlot-tlot! Had they heard it? The horse-hoofs ringing clear;
Tlot-tlot, tlot-tlot, in the distance? Were they deaf that they did not hear?
Down the ribbon of moonlight, over the brow of the hill,
The highwayman came riding,
Riding, riding!
The red-coats looked to their priming! She stood up strait and still!

VII

Tlot-tlot, in the frosty silence! Tlot-tlot, in the echoing night
Nearer he came and nearer! Her face was like a light!
Her eyes grew wide for a moment; she drew one last deep breath,
Then her finger moved in the moonlight,
Her musket shattered the moonlight,
Shattered her breast in the moonlight and warned him-with her death.

VIII
He turned; he spurred to the West; he did not know who stood
Bowed, with her head o'er the musket, drenched with her own red blood!
Not till the dawn he heard it, his face grew grey to hear
How Bess, the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Had watched for her love in the moonlight, and died in the darkness there.

IX

Back, he spurred like a madman, shrieking a curse to the sky,
With the white road smoking behind him and his rapier brandished high!
Blood-red were his spurs i' the golden noon; wine-red was his velvet coat,
When they shot him down on the highway,
Down like a dog on the highway,
And he lay in his blood on the highway, with a bunch of lace at his throat.

X

And still of a winter's night, they say, when the wind is in the trees,
When the moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
When the road is a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor,
A highwayman comes riding-
Riding-riding-
A highwayman comes riding, up to the old inn-door.

XI

Over the cobbles he clatters and clangs in the dark inn-yard,
And he taps with his whip on the shutters, but all is locked and barred;
He whistles a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Bess, the landlord's daughter,
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.

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This is my all time favourite poem.
It has everything I feel a poem should have in both construction and content.

What do you think?
 

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First poem I ever memorized, when I was 9 or so. I made a sideways reference to it in my last book--the characters are on their way to visit the haunted inn that (later) inspired Noyes, when they get held up by real highwaymen.
 

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I can't read it without hearing Loreena McKennitt sing it (album is The Book of Secrets).



(lol, double posted, sorry!)

I love The Highwayman and I love Loreena McKennit's sung version, but I have to say if I ever frickin' kill myself to save your sorry ass, you best stay saved and not come riding back like some damned fool just to get yourself shot. I will find you in hell and I will make you wish you hadn't.

And that's all I have to say about that.
 
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I performed it for a speech competition when I was in the 8th grade. I loved it then, I love it now. This may explain why why I've always felt a bit weak at the sight of a bad boy in breeches!
 

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I haven't read this in ages--and though hampered by its own antiquity, it is still a powerful piece of work. To speak so, beyond its time, it must be masterfully done.
 

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"The Highwayman" is undoubtedly the best known of Noye's poems, Unfortunately, it is also the best. Few of his other Poems begin to approach the same level.

Those who are interested can find some of them at http://www.poemhunter.com/alfred-noyes/

"The Barrel Organ". "Sherwood" and "Kilmeny (A Song of the Trawlers)" are probably the best of the those.

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There is a version illustrated with ink and wash pictures by the astounding Charles Keeping and formatted as a childrens book which I read when I was 7 or 8. It is probably one of the top ten most influential books in my life to date.

You can use the search inside fearure at amazon to have a look at a sample page which is not really one of the best, it is an excellent book: http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/0192723707/?tag=absolutewrite-21
 

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For those who appreciate Noyes, it might be fruitful to look into the Poetry of his contemporary, Rudyard Kipling, who was a contemporary and utilized excessive rhyme and storytelling in much the same way but was far more extensive in his production and much more consistant in quality.

A representative collection of his Poems including "Tommy", "Gunga Din', "Fuzzy Wuzzy", and "Mandalay", (all of which are well suited to declamation), can be found at http://www.everypoet.com/archive/poetry/Rudyard_Kipling/

Moreover, for those who like what they see, a complete collection of his work can be found at http://lockstockandbarrel.org/Poems/Kipling/kipling_ind.html

JRH
 

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JRH,

Rhyme and storytelling.
I think you've hit the nail on the head there.
It's what I really appreciate in a poem. (Along with alliteration and metaphor.)
Thanks for the links to Rudyard Kiplings poems, I'll check them out...
 
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I have never thought the words Kipling and consistent quality went together. But then Noyes is the main reason I wrote a story about a highwayman so it probably isn't surprising I find the suggested substituion to be perverse in the extreme.
 

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There is a version illustrated with ink and wash pictures by the astounding Charles Keeping and formatted as a childrens book which I read when I was 7 or 8. It is probably one of the top ten most influential books in my life to date.

You can use the search inside fearure at amazon to have a look at a sample page which is not really one of the best, it is an excellent book: http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/0192723707/?tag=absolutewrite-21


And this book has very good reviews by the readers.