Formatting quotation marks

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FloVoyager

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Okay, I tried The Chicago Manual of Style, searching here at AW and on the web in general, and checking published books by well-known authors, and I can't find the answer.

How should I format quotes within quotes in dialog? I know to use double then single quotes, as in, "She said, 'Go with your friend.'" That's not what I'm asking about. I'm wondering if there should be any space between the multiple marks when they appear next to each other. I've seen it done in the novels of at least one household name, and that got me to thinking. Which is correct?

1) "She said, 'Go with your friend.'"
2) "She said, 'Go with your friend.' "
 

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I'd probably avoid the entire question by making it, "She told him to go with his friend." :)

But it is the sort of thing that could easily vary from publisher to publisher, according to the "house style" of each. And it's not something an agent or editor is going to trip over while reading, so I'd put it whichever way you want and leave it to the ce to decide.
 

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I'm no expert, but . . .

"She said, Go with your friend."
 

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According to my publisher's house style:


"She said, 'Go with your friend.' " (extra space between the last two quotes)
 

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Like Cheshire, I think I'd avoid it if I could. But when I can't, I've always done it the way Ray does.
 

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Don't use the extra space; when the piece is published it will be typeset and it's a PITA to have to look for stuff like that.

If, on the other hand, the publisher or editor tells you to use extra space, then do, but generally, no.

The typesetter has other ways of controlling the spacing.
 

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I'd avoid writing that way, but if you do, as Medievalist says, no space. Let the copy editor and/or typesetter deal with this.
 

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According to my publisher's house style:


"She said, 'Go with your friend.' " (extra space between the last two quotes)


I'm no expert by any means but this is how I would do it. I looks right to me.
 

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It doesn't matter. Just be consistent. If your novel is bought, the copyeditor will conform the MS to the house style, and no editor is going to reject you just because you used the wrong quote spacing. Stop obsessing about trivialities and concentrate on the writing. THAT is what matters!
 
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This is from wikipedia:

Spacing

There is generally no space between an opening quotation mark and the following word, or a closing quotation mark and the preceding word. When a double quotation mark or a single quotation mark immediately follows the other, proper spacing for legibility requires that a non-breaking space be inserted.

So Dave actually said, “He said, ‘Good morning?’ ”
Yes, he did say, “He said, ‘Good morning.’ ”
 
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