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Mike, I LOVE it!
It's really complex Mike, largely because of your use of the word past, which in both cases threw me completely. This is fine however, in fact it just layers the song with an added level of simple complexity, as you said in your PM. It has a great effect, once you 'get' it.[/COLOR]

 

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Thanks, Guy. I knew you'd get it. Simplicity breeds complexity. I'll get back to you on your essay tomorrow. I liked it when I first read it. I know I'll like it even more tomorrow. (Oops--it is tomorrow).

Happy New Year




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Wow. Simple and accessible.

And maybe I'm just relating too much.

Excellent work.

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Wowza...I really loved it!