I am still new at screenwriting. Until a few minutes ago, I wasn’t sure why we are supposed to write concise, lean descriptive narrative. I was told readers are bored with long descriptions. But now I think there is another more important reason.
I’m targeting a max. 120 page screenplay, so when the reader picks it up, he/she will anticipate about 120 minutes of screen time in it. However, description of settings and costume do not translate into screen time. Only action translates into screen time, and if I'm heavy on description, my 120 page script will boil down significantly.
The realization didn’t hit me until I had written a ten page sequence filled with descriptions of the characters, their dress, and the settings. I thought it was great writing and I would impress the reader. Then I realized the reader could form his/he own vision of the setting and I could use the space to expand the story.
Does this make sense?
I’m targeting a max. 120 page screenplay, so when the reader picks it up, he/she will anticipate about 120 minutes of screen time in it. However, description of settings and costume do not translate into screen time. Only action translates into screen time, and if I'm heavy on description, my 120 page script will boil down significantly.
The realization didn’t hit me until I had written a ten page sequence filled with descriptions of the characters, their dress, and the settings. I thought it was great writing and I would impress the reader. Then I realized the reader could form his/he own vision of the setting and I could use the space to expand the story.
Does this make sense?
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