I've just posted the first four pages of the script I'm currently working on. It's got the really lame title "First two opening scenes" (which is a pleonasm, as opening scenes already implies "first"). Anyway, this is as good as I can make it without any input from outside, but I'm looking forward to improve it based on your critiques.
Why only four pages, you might ask. Simple: I normally decide after four pages if the script is entertaining enough to spend some time reading the whole ten pages/script.
(I put this thread in this forum here because I don't like overlong introductions in the Share-your-work forum. Next time, I won't announce it here, but merely post the scenes in the share-your-work forum.)
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To the mod: If this post qualifies as spam, feel free to delete it immediately.
Why only four pages, you might ask. Simple: I normally decide after four pages if the script is entertaining enough to spend some time reading the whole ten pages/script.
(I put this thread in this forum here because I don't like overlong introductions in the Share-your-work forum. Next time, I won't announce it here, but merely post the scenes in the share-your-work forum.)
Direct link: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1005718#post1005718
To the mod: If this post qualifies as spam, feel free to delete it immediately.